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[NEW] Bar - My Story Through Flow(Produced By Mart85)

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Re: [NEW] Bar - My Story Through Flow(Produced By Mart85)

Postby sinemm » Jun 18th, '07, 17:50

the chorus is diff.than i usually heard from you but that sounds nice
just one thing from what i hear

its umm how to say when the rhythm is fast i heard ur breathing noise much :unsure: dunno

but still a good track
and the beat is very nice thats tru :flutter:
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Re: [NEW] Bar - My Story Through Flow(Produced By Mart85)

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 18th, '07, 19:13

i like how the beat changed and so did your flow. i like the talking on the hook rather than an actual hook, it's a good concept. overall it's a great concept, but you should tweak the lyrics and make them a little clearer. i had a tough time understanding you. good job, keep working.
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Re: [NEW] Bar - My Story Through Flow(Produced By Mart85)

Postby Flamez » Jun 19th, '07, 07:20

Love the beat and Love the track, i liked the lyrics and ya flow was great :y: :8)
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Re: [NEW] Bar - My Story Through Flow(Produced By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 19th, '07, 16:40

thanks for the feed you three, appreciate it :worship:
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