"Str8 From Cali" By Flamez **mixed by Tash8** (Unfinshed)

[Flamez]

here's an unfinished song but since my pc fucked up so bad here it is unfinished lol

here the link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/232623647130e0/


what you think?

[Tash8]

yea man, it's fucked up what happened with your computer, i was excited about mixing the rest of it, but i thought you had a pretty good flow there..

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

nice flow man..........
like the chorus very much.....
great job btoh of you

[Kez]

I'm surprised!

Is that your first audio?
The hook is good considering, since you have good vocal control an shit, it sounds good.
The verses are okay, but they seem a bit forced. It's hard to describe, just dosen't sound natural. It's a thing that all new artsits go through, i went through it for about 7 months.
Overall it's pretty good though for a first, so 7/10

[Flamez]

thanx tash and chris

and kez naww this ain't my first audio but i think i improved a bit and thanx man

[Tash8]

yo i'd suggest you feed someone elses shit and tell them to feed urs in return that might help

[Flamez]

yea guess i should do that

[sinemm]

as i listened to ur first attempt too i can see the change

dunno if i told you this before but you have a different accent but sounds ok

overally cool track even if its not finished

[Flamez]

thanx for the comments sarah and sinemm

[Curtis]

The Chorus is great

And the beat+chrous is good too.

Great Job

Can't wait to hear the full version.

[Tash8]

The Chorus is great

And the beat+chrous is good too.

Great Job

Can't wait to hear the full version.

there is no full version

[Curtis]

The Chorus is great

And the beat+chrous is good too.

Great Job

Can't wait to hear the full version.

there is no full version

Wtf? Isnt it..."unfinished"?

[Tash8]

why would anyone release something that's unfinished? you only release it finished.. he can't finish it anymore cuz his comp crashed or something and shits gone

[Curtis]

Oh ok

[Flamez]

thanx for the comments