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I tried a remix

Postby Kez » Jun 21st, '07, 16:38

Hahahahahahaha

It was for fun.
So, fuck haters
Keep in mind i am a BEGINNER. This is like the third remix i've ever done.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/23682023db1c23/
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Re: I tried a remix

Postby Kez » Jun 21st, '07, 20:55

Killa wrote:the first hook was awful the verses fit well for a beginner...urgh cashis lol def good tho for someone just starting.


Haha i know but the acapella had Ca$his on it so i couldn't be arsed take it off cause that would of meant more cutting and splicing
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Re: I tried a remix

Postby Tash8 » Jun 21st, '07, 21:08

sorry didn't like it

the chorus didn't fit with the beat...

the verses flowed nicely

i know ur a beginner, I am too.so if you need help with anything, IM i'll help

btw what beat was that?
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Re: I tried a remix

Postby mart85 » Jun 21st, '07, 21:14

tash, didn't you recognize the "Business" beat? :whistle:

btw, it's not bad for a beginner, the verses flow decently, but like other people said, the chorus didn't sound too good :sweating: but good job on this :y:
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Re: I tried a remix

Postby IceAxe » Jun 21st, '07, 21:16

I actually kinda like this.....

the verses fit pretty well, but the chorus didnt flow to good

was pretty good for a beginner... keep workin at it
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Re: I tried a remix

Postby Tash8 » Jun 21st, '07, 21:17

mart85 wrote:tash, didn't you recognize the "Business" beat? :whistle:

btw, it's not bad for a beginner, the verses flow decently, but like other people said, the chorus didn't sound too good :sweating: but good job on this :y:


nop, i don't listen to that song enough for business lol ;)

btw for the chorus you just make it sound like a chorus, make it sound more powerful than the verses
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Re: I tried a remix

Postby matz » Jun 21st, '07, 23:19

im givin u huge props for gettin it perfectly on beat :worship: :worship: most people struglle wid dat lol chorus is a bit patchy.....cashis verse def not perfect.....acapellas seems pretty loud in places
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