LW2: Tight Virgin Vs Syphilliss (VOTE or get ASS RAPED)

[Tash8]

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

3 votes to win



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Syph-ILL-iss
i'm about to loosen this tight virgin, because i'm a contrite surgeon
her pussy contract as i cut the light skin, i want to leave the hymen intact, she might chagrin
damn my hand slips and rips the lips, now she feels stripped cause i dipped my hands in her uterus
i would compose a chorus but this is disatrous, 3 pieces of fresh flesh got it lookin' like cerberus
now she's havin' an orgasm this was her fantasm, she's showin' enthusiasm
psych that was just a strike of sarcasm, she screamin' so hard she's havin' laryngospasm

laryngospasm = a closure of the larynx that blocks the passage of air to the lungs


Tight Virgin
syph-ill-iss,i getchu sick-from-this while you-got-drips hangin from-ya-dick,cuz you cant get-a-bitch
so you been pokin' ya momma wit ya-little-prick after ya pops pulled out wit a chancre on-his-stick

quick-to-spit-the-shit that makes-you-cringe,put hot brand in ya-granny's-minge,if you puke to me
thats-all-the-better,carve-my-name on-ya-brain in 8-inch-letters,a-little-insane,it makes-me-brasher

i take out more than-tornado-disasters,imma-fast-slasher my rhymes'll flat-out-blast-ya,smash-ya
imma money-makin'-casher,lyrical-master,undeniably-a-dynamo,frozen heart wit blood-oh-so-cold...


Explanation:

Chancre: Pronounced "shanker", the medical word for the sores you get from syphilis
Brasher: Lacking in sensitivity or tact.
If you puke to me: Puke, get sick listening to my tracks, battles etc.

[4D]

FLOW - Syph-ILL-Iss
STRUCTURE - Tight Virgin
PUNCHES - Tie, both had pretty weak punches
MULTIES - Tie, both not very good
RHYMES - Tie, both had soem okay rhymes, but neither great
VOCAB - Syph-ILL-Iss, both had soem very nice vocab, but Syph-ILL-Iss just edged it for me
COMPLEXITY - Tie, both had complex voacb, but simplistic rhymes.
NAMEPLAY - Tie, both had some nameplay, but neither kicking the others ass
OTHER - Syph-ILL-Iss, I just enjoyed his use of words, and his flow better.

Vote: 8-6 to Syph-ILL-Iss


Tight Virgin, you are marking your words like they-are-multies, but-they're-not.

[Rain Matrix]

FLOW - Syph cuz he had much better vocab
STRUCTURE - Tie
PUNCHES- Syph cuz virgins was not easy 2 follow
MULTIES- What multi's
RHYMES- Syph
VOCAB- Syph
COMPLEXITY- Virgin cuz he tried like hell
NAMEPLAY- Tie

Overall- 6-3 Syph Ill Is wins

[C-Game]

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[J Roc]

FLOW--syphilis
STRUCTURE--tight virgin
PUNCHES--tie
MULTIES--syphilisis
RHYMES--tight virgin
VOCAB--syphilisis
COMPLEXITY--tie
NAMEPLAY--syphilsis
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)--syphilisis

addin up its 7/4-syphilsis