*NEW* C-Riz-Birth of Solitude

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C-Riz - Birth of Solitude
http://www.zshare.net/audio/25299238963116/


ya still know my tape is coming.... just a lil reminder
thx to tash fo mixing great job man

enjoy peepz

[Tash8]

probably your best song, the chorus started out with nice emotion you gotta keep it throughout next time... keep it up

[3110]

geiles lied alter
(good shit )

[Tash8]

i like the last verse the best

it sounded like shit, till i mixed it

[randomghost]

i need a small version of the song like 3mb anyone

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i need a small version of the song like 3mb anyone

tash was so kindly
http://www.zshare.net/audio/253108591bb9be/
not the best quality tho

[Tash8]

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thx fo feed ppl....and checkin
yea pronouncation is a problem....but i will solve it ..i guess

[randomghost]

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[randomghost]

its an ok song ..beat is ok flow is improved ...and i agree verse 3 is the best...good mixin...lookin forward

[Tash8]

its an ok song ..beat is ok flow is improved ...and i agree verse 3 is the best...good mixin...lookin forward

thanks fo the mixing comment

[C-Game]

well i didnt like da delivary that much

it sounded as if u were gaspin for words at times...
liked da beat...
mixin was oki...

da style in da 3rd verse suits ur style mate...

anyway not your best work but good effort...

keep it up

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^thx man

[mart85]

yeah I agree with Cgame... and i thought you could have more emotion in your voice, more "attitude"... to sound like you really mean what you say... but you can still practise that, it takes time to get better at that and yeah, try to practise your pronounciation too

other than that nice job, the hook was nice and the verses too... keep it up

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thx mart
yea...gotta practise a lot on both