*NEW* C-Riz-Birth of Solitude

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you got to get better beat choice man cant enjoy the track coz i dont like the beat, but for constructive feed


your prounouncing and projection needs work, chorus writing needs work if you want a tip on how to make simple effective choruses hit me up on msn n ill help you

your flows simple but with better prounouncing nh clearer spitting it could sound smoother

keep it up man

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx bar
yea...my english is a problem

[$0 R3@L]

Not bad at all.

Beat choice isnt very nice but i did like your verses.

Big improvment bro,keep at it.

[Call Me Pik]

i dint like this track tah be honest maybe kuz of the quality or suhin but wasnt really feelin it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx so real
and call me prik thx fo checkin tho