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Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 4th, '07, 11:59

good track fo 5minits :y:
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 4th, '07, 15:14

nice track for 5 minutes :y:

does what is was ment to do, true message aswell

uhm, for constructive feed, i dont really need to coz its a 5 minute track n im sure you know everything that should (and would) have got fixed if it was ment to be a full serious track ya know :sweating:
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 4th, '07, 15:37

Killa wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
uhm, for constructive feed, i dont really need to coz its a 5 minute track n im sure you know everything that should (and would) have got fixed if it was ment to be a full serious track ya know :sweating:


well aug will bring the awnsers to that 1 lol

got 80% of the equipment needed now btw so only need the lil parts now :y:



awesome :smoking:

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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby stevethetruth » Jul 4th, '07, 15:41

yo i'm gonna check this out when i get home if i forget then remind me if you can :P
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby mart85 » Jul 4th, '07, 16:32

yeah it's definately nice for a 5-7 minute song :y:

cool lyrics/message and flow/delivery was good for a song that you didn't practise a lot

good job :y:
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby randomghost » Jul 4th, '07, 17:49

wow..good job for 5 minuts man :y: ...and nice beat :y: ..hot flow...good work :y: :8)
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby $0 R3@L » Jul 4th, '07, 21:59

at first i thought you done a 5 minute track in length lol

Anyway,great job man.Loved the lines and the flow.Big improvment on your first stuff.

Keep em coming bro :worship:
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby Call Me Pik » Jul 5th, '07, 06:38

i like the song took some time to get over the tupac version but once i did it was whut it was
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby C-Game » Jul 5th, '07, 16:11

good job dude ....
some parts u were rushin ..

but its awesome for a 5 minute job....
good lyrics and flow...

good stuff :y:
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 5th, '07, 21:49

listening now

always liked this beat :y:
nice flow. good concept too, like the 50cent/lil wayne line. a bit off flow at a point or 2 since you sped up a little but no big deal for a 5min. track. keep it up man, p.o.t.p.'s gonna be sick :y:
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Re: Stop Sleeping (5 mins 2)

Postby Kez » Jul 5th, '07, 22:14

Hahaha props on mentionin me and Ax! :worship:

I like the beat

Really great for a 5 minute track, and pretty damn good for a normal track too, though i know your proper stuff's concentrated on more by you. Everythin about it's good, the concept, the flow and the lyrics etc

It's hard to give constructive feed on tracks made in 5 minutes, but i liked it, let's leave it at that :sweating:
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