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rain matrix Versus enimee

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 13th, '07, 04:06

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Re: rain matrix Versus enimee

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 13th, '07, 21:53

u chose 2 start beefing, remember that when u find yur parts leaking
cuz 1 second it's hard breathing, than u look 4 friends with hearts beating

without a witness, enemy my militia's gonna get ya at tha finish, nah right this minute
I'll rupture yur structure motherfucker, so fast my name will have tha record in guiness

eveything u do, will be assisted, u thinking ya gifted, battling me was a bad call
acceptance, then rage is tha plan, I'll engage u like a man, like if u had balls

I own tha texters like a bone collecter, enemy's head is rains fresh skull
son I see raps placement, relax ya basic, like I decapitated yur pain threshold
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Re: rain matrix Versus enimee

Postby Enimee » Jul 14th, '07, 08:11

this dudes past easily beaten my's eyes bled just afta seein this creten
u deserve no rap name cause ur too meesly and weekened u can smell da semen afta he's speakin

u lack tha testicles to even begin to see on my level so just quit tryin
thought i couldnt mess wit u but now ur gonna see the way my rhymes put rest to you i mean ur diein

simply with no peace just peices u rap meekly and just a lil too freaky
goth homo emo and gay im bout to reach in pull out your beating heart shove it down your throat and say "EAT ME"

lyrically im better so lets end this endeavor with 6 holes to your preppy sweater
u shuda slept better no vendetta just me whoopin ya like a pet vender a sweat sender left deader
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Re: rain matrix Versus enimee

Postby J Roc » Jul 19th, '07, 15:51

FLOW::Rain Matrix//enimee with bad lines it was hard to find a gud flow for me
STRUCTURE::Rain Matrix//enimee had lines goin everywhere
PUNCHES::Enimee//Rains never hit hard like enimees
MULTIES::Rain Matrix://his was gud an i never seen n e from enimee
RHYMES::Rain Matrix//multies are advanced rhymes,enimee was pretty gud here tho
VOCAB::close,but enimee//both hada lota hard words i never understood but he hada bit more
COMPLEXITY::tie//rain had flow an multies//enimee had vocab an punches
NAMEPLAY::Rain Matrix cuz he switched enimee wit enemy,enimee never mentioned Rains name
OTHER::Rain Matrix//no metaphores,but both had simlies which Rain had more of

tried 2 explain why each vote

3/7 to Rain,it was closer then tha vote shows,but not tha closest battle i seen :unsure: enimee was better here then alota battles i seen from his so far tho
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Re: rain matrix Versus enimee

Postby Tash8 » Jul 31st, '07, 04:29

u chose 2 start beefing, remember that when u find yur parts leaking
cuz 1 second it's hard breathing, than u look 4 friends with hearts beating

3/10 i don't get how any of that is really punches, correct me if i'm wrong

without a witness, enemy my militia's gonna get ya at tha finish, nah right this minute
I'll rupture yur structure motherfucker, so fast my name will have tha record in guiness

5/10 the guiness one wasn't too bad, but your spelling needs to be uped for battles

eveything u do, will be assisted, u thinking ya gifted, battling me was a bad call
acceptance, then rage is tha plan, I'll engage u like a man, like if u had balls

2/10 nothing personal, nothing even clsoe to being good..

I own tha texters like a bone collecter, enemy's head is rains fresh skull
son I see raps placement, relax ya basic, like I decapitated yur pain threshold

3/10 ok that simile was trash, and the rest is huh?

Rain Matrix: 3.25/10

this dudes past easily beaten my's eyes bled just afta seein this creten
u deserve no rap name cause ur too meesly and weekened u can smell da semen afta he's speakin

4/10 atleast it had a punch

u lack tha testicles to even begin to see on my level so just quit tryin
thought i couldnt mess wit u but now ur gonna see the way my rhymes put rest to you i mean ur diein

1/10 the first few words of the second line aren't the best thing to say...

simply with no peace just peices u rap meekly and just a lil too freaky
goth homo emo and gay im bout to reach in pull out your beating heart shove it down your throat and say "EAT ME"

1/10 flow was terrible

lyrically im better so lets end this endeavor with 6 holes to your preppy sweater
u shuda slept better no vendetta just me whoopin ya like a pet vender a sweat sender left deader

3/10 ehh

Enimee: 2.25/10

keep at it
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Re: rain matrix Versus enimee

Postby Kojack » Aug 1st, '07, 06:39

You both made 8 bars instead of 4. Both disqualified.
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Re: rain matrix Versus enimee

Postby Tash8 » Aug 1st, '07, 06:48

Kojack wrote:You both made 8 bars instead of 4. Both disqualified.


dunno why but people call 4 bars 8 lines when 1 bar should be just one line.,.
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Re: rain matrix Versus enimee

Postby Kojack » Aug 1st, '07, 06:53

1 bar = 1 line but 99% of people can't understand it.
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