let me know what you think... I'm thinking of sending this to this one A&R from Shady Records... good one or naw? Constructive criticism appreciated... haters-get the fuck on
New Song For Shady
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New Song For Shady
by SurpassinSkillz » Jul 12th, '07, 10:35
New song... http://youtube.com/watch?v=da-zC1qxjdk
let me know what you think... I'm thinking of sending this to this one A&R from Shady Records... good one or naw? Constructive criticism appreciated... haters-get the fuck on
let me know what you think... I'm thinking of sending this to this one A&R from Shady Records... good one or naw? Constructive criticism appreciated... haters-get the fuck on
Last edited by SurpassinSkillz on Jul 12th, '07, 10:36, edited 1 time in total.
rap music is fucked up ain't it
the way these pictures are painted
u swear these fuckers are dangerous
the gangsta shit they be sayin
lock em up in the booth with a ounce of that cannibus
sit back and watch the outlandish shit they betrayin
but soon as u see em they freeze up like museums
fuckers get the runnin before i finish my sentence
and then they back threatin through speakin
bitch u were just here u dissapeared like magaicians
into thin air ..i'm like damn at least keep it consistent
the way these pictures are painted
u swear these fuckers are dangerous
the gangsta shit they be sayin
lock em up in the booth with a ounce of that cannibus
sit back and watch the outlandish shit they betrayin
but soon as u see em they freeze up like museums
fuckers get the runnin before i finish my sentence
and then they back threatin through speakin
bitch u were just here u dissapeared like magaicians
into thin air ..i'm like damn at least keep it consistent
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Re: New Song For Shady
by Tash8 » Jul 12th, '07, 17:35
there's an audios tage where this should be placed man and second why should everyone feed you when you dont feed them
you got a nice flow, lyrics are so - so, nice delivery, your pronounciation needs to improve a lil bit
and plus fuck shady, their all a bunch of shit artists.
you got a nice flow, lyrics are so - so, nice delivery, your pronounciation needs to improve a lil bit
and plus fuck shady, their all a bunch of shit artists.
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Re: New Song For Shady
by dookie » Jul 12th, '07, 19:22
how many people have done the "ive gotta make it" rap now
is it...a million?
how cliche can u get, stop talking about shit and write poetry.
is it...a million?
how cliche can u get, stop talking about shit and write poetry.
Whats the use between death and glory?
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Re: New Song For Shady
by $0 R3@L » Jul 13th, '07, 06:20
Well i thought it was one of the strongest tracks posted on tr so far.
You remind me of Jin a little,great flow and some strong lines.
The production wasnt half bad too,great job dude.
And good luck when you send the demo,wish you all the best mate.
You remind me of Jin a little,great flow and some strong lines.
The production wasnt half bad too,great job dude.
And good luck when you send the demo,wish you all the best mate.
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Re: New Song For Shady
by DelinQuent » Jul 13th, '07, 20:07
i was feelin your flow and lyrics. keep workin. good luck.
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Re: New Song For Shady
by Kez » Jul 13th, '07, 20:40
Hey, what do you have to lose?
It's a good song
Good luck
It's a good song
Good luck
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