LW2: MC Can-I-Bust vs Captain Jack Sparrow ( VOTE OR DIE )

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

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MC Can-I-bust
my word are like a chain-and saw, in your ear turn ya brain-to-slaw
my aim-is-raw, I'll explain-your-flaws you got a weak train-ed-jaw

Im a massive-genious, your skills come up short like a flaccid-penis
you'r smacks-are-meanless you failed attackin-me-kid go back-reccede-bitch

Jackson-Sparrow, get's hacked-to-marrow when I attack-like-arrows
your action's-Darrow, my act-is-areocentric now you need a pair-o-medics


EX:
areocentric - relating to space
pair-o-medics - "paramedics"
Darrow- lawyer who fought for lost causes

Captain Jack Sparrow

wanna be buster, see me crush all yur other ambitions in life
yur stuck dude, fuck u, on yur way 2 hell, tha transitons grim right

bet yur luck, son u don't measure up, u'll never bust, like a dickless man
u better rush, 2 ya sickest plan, cuz I'll put people on witness stands

yur hotter, not, u at tha coppers shop, sick, u check out what yur daughters got
son with a single slam, I'll leave u like a pringles can, when I pop yur top

[Tash8]

FLOW: Tie
STRUCTURE: MC Can-I-bust
PUNCHES: MC Can-I-bust
MULTIES: MC Can-I-bust
RHYMES: MC Can-I-bust
VOCAB: MC Can-I-bust
COMPLEXITY: MC Can-I-bust
NAMEPLAY: MC Can-I-bust
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off): MC Can-I-bust, I loved the similes you had!

complete destruction, the other guys' shit hardly made sense too

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FLOW - mc can i bust ( captin's was to jumpy woth the commas)
STRUCTURE - mc can i bust
PUNCHES - mc can i bust
MULTIES - mc can i bust
RHYMES - mc can i bust
VOCAB - mc can i bust
COMPLEXITY - mc can i bust
NAMEPLAY - mc can i bust
OTHER - mc can i bust ( wipe out)


vote - mc can i bust

[J Roc]

FLOW::tie,both were an easy read
STRUCTURE::can i bust
PUNCHES::jak sparrow
MULTIES::tie,i thot both was gud
RHYMES::tie,multies are advaned rhymes an thats all they have
VOCAB::can i bust
COMPLEXITY::tie,jak got flow,punches,multies an can i bust got vocab,flow an multies
NAMEPLAY::mc can i bust
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)mc can i bust had more simles

5/8 to can i bust,both drops was gud in my oppiniun