I SING WHEN I'M GONE

[GDBSB]

HELLO EVERYBODY
THIS IS GDBSB
TODAY I BRING A DEMO SINGING BY ME
HEHE I DON'T KNOW IF IT'S RIGHT TO PUT IT IN THIS STAGE
SO IF I MADE A MISTAKE PLZ FORGIVE ME ....
AS I'M FROM CHINA SO I DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT ENGLISH
THX FOR LISTENING

HERE IS THE LINK http://music.fenbei.com/8221738

[Call Me Pik]

lmao real good track nice job

[DelinQuent]

joke?

[C-Game]

^
i dunno....
but da link is kinda confusin
i think we need to have chinese language installed

[GDBSB]

THX
WHEN U CLICK IT U CAN HEAR
U DON'T NEED TO KNOW CHINESE

[sinemm]

you have a nice voice
but i didnt like it at all..i dont know why..it can be cuz of ur accent or the girl sound..we're used to hear it from eminem u know..ur also missing some words in the rap verses..the chorus isnt loud enough..

i dont know
sing in ur own language
or different songs..ur own songs..dunno..

[CaptivatingVokalz]

Since I hope we're all here for honest feedback and constructive criticism... this was absolutely terrible... to the point it hurt my ears... I'm sorry but I didn't hear not one ounce of passion nor did you sound like you were trying

[Curtis]

Since I hope we're all here for honest feedback and constructive criticism... this was absolutely terrible... to the point it hurt my ears... I'm sorry but I didn't hear not one ounce of passion nor did you sound like you were trying

harsh.

[Call Me Pik]

Since I hope we're all here for honest feedback and constructive criticism... this was absolutely terrible... to the point it hurt my ears... I'm sorry but I didn't hear not one ounce of passion nor did you sound like you were trying

hahahaha this girl is crazy real... i luv it

[Tash8]

i just woke up to this comment, nice

[C-Game]

i still cant manage to play the song

[Kez]

i still cant manage to play the song

[Tash8]

i still cant manage to play the song

[GDBSB]

Since I hope we're all here for honest feedback and constructive criticism... this was absolutely terrible... to the point it hurt my ears... I'm sorry but I didn't hear not one ounce of passion nor did you sound like you were trying

HEHE THX FOR UR HONEST
I'M HAPPY ~~ BUT I REALLY WORK HARD ON IT
U R NOT CHINESE AND U DON'T KNOW HOW HARD IT IS FOR A CHINESE
ESPECIALLY A GIRL LIKE ME THAT CAN'T ABLE TO SPEAK ENGLISH QUITE WELL TO RAP
ACTUALLY U HURT ME A LITTLE
BUT I'M STILL HAPPY TO HEAR U CUZ U R REALLY HONEST
MY ENGLISH IS REALLY POOR
AND I'LL STUDY HARDER AND HARDER
AND I WANNA GET UR ENCOURAGEMENT~~

[Tash8]

i'ma be honest too, if your chinese then you got two choices actually 3 choices

1: Don't sing in english
2: Learn English before you sing.
3: Don't Ruin good Fucking Songs, honestly go ahead and sing FACK but don't sing songs like When I'm Gone

I got no problem with people practicing, and keep doing it.. just get the basics first

one thing that really pisses me off is accents, I love hearing great lyrics but honestly if you got a bad accent then i'd rather just read the fuckin lyrics. people say you can't work on an accent cause an accent is accent, nah fuck that yes you can, pronounce the letters like they were meant to be pronounced in English..

good luck and keep practising