Broken Tides - Vettori (serius song)

[Vettori]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2989410d1fade6/


Please check it and leave feed Would be really appreciated ...Id say lyrically my best song

[Vettori]

Lyrics to Broken Tides

I try to get you out there Happy and Active
But this drug addicts fixed on shit
addiction and a half Ima smash him
You one of my best dudes your drastically collapsin
This rap shit is your way out But it dont explain all your actions
If i didnt have your back man, How come i cry when your hurt
Id die to fuckin morrow if you cleaned up You deserve
way better Don't do this shit to yaself I'm not pissed off
at the fact that you yell at me it's the fact that i cant help
sit on My ass and try to steer you on the right path
Im crashin quick. No mats for my balance
I'm struck cant even imagine it gets so bashful
I'm tryin hard to hold up. dont no whats botherin u
Chippin my teeth and bitin my gums
But you sit laughin as you watch your self funnel ya life
Into some dark belive me Bro Ive been there thats right
Just open ur eyes is what i ask dont make me go nuts
Ill Kill a mother fuck who cusses you out I on give a fuck

I know ya life aint easy held It's like holdin the planet
People make it seem like it was by choice like you had planned it
But me and you were cut from the same cloth so it doesnt matter
What ever happens to you happens to me This shits Tragic
Plastic covers unwrapped It's real life now We gotta man up
We dont need a stamp a name brand just our strength and hands up
Gotta stand up and drill our fuckin feet to the ground
They try to budge us Understand we Beat all odds and our sound
Its not somethin yu can copy hit it big time or not
It's one step at a time our climb survivin our spots
It's all the small things add up, and if it dont shall we drop
topplin millions of mutherfuckas It's to hard to put your trust
But when you meet a soldier its almost a must
I hope to be devine one day and Lead a fuckin army to dust
when all my city boys see me dont fear me waddup
You got beef come get me i'm always ready for Lunch

[Kez]

Beat's pretty good

Great flow
Lyrics are pretty good, not too complicated though
Delivery's fine
Pretty good track
9/10

[Tash8]

Flow: good
Lyrics: pretty simple but they got the point accross
Hook: It was too high pitched

good job on this.

[Vettori]

thx alot guys appreciated...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

damn...real good delievery lyrically
agin nice one
*downloads*

[B.A.D.]

nice lyrics and beat

nice effort made on this track... a lil high pitched for me... but its good

[Vettori]

Thx alot....I dont exactly know what yu mean too high pitched...Like my voice ? ...I didnt think it sounded to high pitched...anyways thx for the feed