[mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

[Restlesswon]

yo full review soon bruh

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reminder fo some open reviews

[B.A.D.]

reminder fo some open reviews

yo chris, get into msn.... got good news for ya

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uppin
and some ppl wanted to review it soon

[mart85]

I'll try to leave feed soon lol, I just didn't have time to listen to it yet I don't remember the last time I could listen to a full album to be honest so I'll listen to a song or 2 today, a song or 2 tomorrow etc... and then I'll leave comments

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dont worry and dont rush

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i think imma bump this again

[Xray]

From the introduction to the last track shit was pretty dope and descent for a beginner rapper keep this up and youre looking at a record deal in 10 years time my fav track is time to shine shit was dope as fuk but one thing that fuks ur qaulity up is ur pronounciation but no worries u gone be all good and running in a few years time

TAKING OVER MOTHERFUCKERS!
oh and Bump

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chea we taking over hit u with da crow bar BOOOM
thx man...yea give me some time and im bangin real classics....hahaha

[Jay_LP1]

mind providing the lyrics of ur songs??

[James R.]

I'm just gonna give you an overall judgment on the mixtape. The lyrics weren't bad, but they definitely could use some improvement. That could have a lot to do with the fact that I couldn't understand what the hell you were saying through 50% of the songs. Also you need to slow down your flow because when you have to gasp for air you A.) Distract people from the lyrics B.) have to force yourself to speed up to keep up with the beat and C.) You lose the natural rhythm of your song. The production was decent but in some of the songs (Wanna Be Your Lover specifically) the hook came in at an awkward moment and threw the whole song off. Your flow wasn't bad, but like I said, you should experiment with different speeds so you don't out-rap your lungs. And the hooks you did were ok, but they sounded very mechanical like you had no emotion involved in the song. Even if it isn't an emotional song, the way you say what you say is sometimes (actually most times) more important that what you're actually saying.

Overall - Man this is a good mixtape, you've improved a lot, keep at it.. your last 2 songs [time to shine, how i feel] were real real real big improvement, keep at it and you'll be real good soon.. just work on these things: Delievery/Pronounciation, Lyrics, Concepts

hahahahahahahahaha tash you realize you just said "Yeah this was dope all you have to work on is rapping good."

[Kez]

^ Lol

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I'm just gonna give you an overall judgment on the mixtape. The lyrics weren't bad, but they definitely could use some improvement. That could have a lot to do with the fact that I couldn't understand what the hell you were saying through 50% of the songs. Also you need to slow down your flow because when you have to gasp for air you A.) Distract people from the lyrics B.) have to force yourself to speed up to keep up with the beat and C.) You lose the natural rhythm of your song. The production was decent but in some of the songs (Wanna Be Your Lover specifically) the hook came in at an awkward moment and threw the whole song off. Your flow wasn't bad, but like I said, you should experiment with different speeds so you don't out-rap your lungs. And the hooks you did were ok, but they sounded very mechanical like you had no emotion involved in the song. Even if it isn't an emotional song, the way you say what you say is sometimes (actually most times) more important that what you're actually saying.

thx man yea i got a new track in work,,,will put 10000% in it wait and see homie haha

[Tash8]

I'm just gonna give you an overall judgment on the mixtape. The lyrics weren't bad, but they definitely could use some improvement. That could have a lot to do with the fact that I couldn't understand what the hell you were saying through 50% of the songs. Also you need to slow down your flow because when you have to gasp for air you A.) Distract people from the lyrics B.) have to force yourself to speed up to keep up with the beat and C.) You lose the natural rhythm of your song. The production was decent but in some of the songs (Wanna Be Your Lover specifically) the hook came in at an awkward moment and threw the whole song off. Your flow wasn't bad, but like I said, you should experiment with different speeds so you don't out-rap your lungs. And the hooks you did were ok, but they sounded very mechanical like you had no emotion involved in the song. Even if it isn't an emotional song, the way you say what you say is sometimes (actually most times) more important that what you're actually saying.

Overall - Man this is a good mixtape, you've improved a lot, keep at it.. your last 2 songs [time to shine, how i feel] were real real real big improvement, keep at it and you'll be real good soon.. just work on these things: Delievery/Pronounciation, Lyrics, Concepts

hahahahahahahahaha tash you realize you just said "Yeah this was dope all you have to work on is rapping good."

you should reread it cause it states that he improved a lot, but that doesn't mean he still shouldn't work on those.. there's more to rap besides those things..