OfficialBlueBoys vs Tash8

[J Roc]

for an fall dont rhyme...so that one isnt a multi,an imagery is how well ya rap paints a picture in yur mind.tho it aint a category

[Tash8]

umm

yes

niagra fall
viagra for

have you seen someone rhyme britney spears with chair???

I have

So you can, sit me here next to Britney Spears?
Shit, Christina Aguilera better switch me chairs

it does rhyme..

[Mc-Itty]

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[Tash8]

wow okay

this is one of the reason battling on text sucks completely

[Mc-Itty]

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[C-Game]

whitey ford
bite me whore

viagra for
niagra fall

defiant disorder
californian border

1st couple is a 3 syllable perfect multi
2nd couple is a 4 syllable sounding like multi ( not a hard one though ,, doesnt get da cat )

3rd couple is a multie .. not a perfect one though
de-fi-ant-dis-order
li-for-ni-an-border
da syllable count match .. but 2 many middle syllables dat does not rhyme... nonetheless can make it sound like one...


p.s : and da only reason i made da 30post or 50 post count thingy wen votin is dat a friend can make an account and vote..since we know Itty is genuine its kool to accept her vote.. i have done it in da past in tourneys.. and since we r not gettin votes these days like back in da day .. it is appropriate to accept.. considerin da fact she broke it down to avoid any confusions..

[Tash8]

thanks c-game... i don't get how people can't get that

and yea fine whatever, it's 1-1, someone else vote please?

[Tash8]

motherfuckers if you don't vote, i'ma come to ur house and rape u or ur wife or ur girlfriend and if you have none like global then i'ma rape ur dog.

[4D]

Structure: Tash
Flow: OBB, had a smoother flow than Tash's.
Punches: Tie, Both had a few but neither were nails in the coffin imo
Multis: tash just edged it, OBB had the first 2 lines, but Tash a had a few more
Rhymes: tash
Wordplay: tash, had one or two nice metaphor's.
Vocab: Tie, both had average vocab, nothing really impressive.
Nameplay: Tash, OBB didn't have any in my eyes.


I really like the flow of OBB's verse, it just flies by, so when I was reading it, it was tempting to think it was better than Tash's. But, because there are Categories, we have to be technical. And to be honest Tash won it in most areas. @ Mc-Itty, I see what you're saying, but The whitey ford, and Niagra Falls multies are fine. The California one does not work, and is not a multi, that would not even work in audio. The point to text battles is to write rap lyrics and battle with the lyrics. So technically they should be multi's in audio and text. If you're relying on an accent to pull off the multi, don't do it, that won't work. I don't think that has been done in this one, cos that Californian multi doesn't work in any conceivable way. But, Tash still took it on multi's cos of OBB's one and only multi attempt, and yes OBB you got it right, keep it up. Tash you are still improving with the wordplay and metaphor's keep it up man. But, don't sacrifice flow for wordplay or complexity, flow is the single most important category, even though they all only count as one each. If any category would count as 2, it would be flow.

Vote: Tash.

[Tash8]

thanks man

and yea i hear ya about flow, and a few days ago i was telling you i was practicing my flow, by using Nas's flow on One Mic and taking that and changing it to my style and that would help me a bit

thanks for vote