LW2: Pro Found vs Link (VOTE coz LW2 is BACK)

[C-Game]

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

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Pro Found
assertive like an evasive fugitive, but furtive like a detective
that's the perfect perspective for my project and objective
link's on the brink of being extinct, blink and your flow'll sink when i release the ink
i'm pro-found, blooming with meaning, found my sound below the ground now i'm hellbound
i'm so sick i slice a mice spice it with rice and mix it in yo breathing device
i spin-dice on thin-ice, i said i'd be nice but i sinned-twice for this price

Link

Pros Ravagly Obliterated-his-Found illiterated-this-Hound is next of kin of J.Brown
in his minds eye painted him black in reality his whiter than the KKK,-Fed up in rap

castrated his dead-on-his-tracks his meta-foes are left-onhold claimin his vigorous
PF is da inspiration behind the book,21 things a 15 year old ridiculous w*igger-does

i did a prison break on ur prison of bars,atrritioned ur scarred in your mind u think
u fuck!! even einstein couldnt just live long enough to find da link to grind dis link

exp:
meta-foes = hidden enemies / metaphores
Pros Ravagly Obliterated his Found = PRO Found name play
book name is ="21 things a 15 year old ridiculous w*igger-does "
i easily broke outta ur prison of bars - prison break LInk
find the link to grind this link - find da way to defeat me

[4D]

FLOW - Pro Found, Links verse flow was messed up by bad grammar
STRUCTURE - Link. You gotta watch not rhyming at the end of a sentence with the last one link, cos that's bad structure too, it's not all about line length
PUNCHES - Link, Pro Found didn't really have any punches.
MULTIES - Link, only just took it, didn't have many good multi's either
RHYMES - Pro Found, had more rhymes.
VOCAB - Pro Found, I like the use of words like assertive and furtive, they're not common
COMPLEXITY - Tie, neither were that complex
NAMEPLAY - Link. But neither had any great nameplay

Vote goes to Link 5-4.

I`m disappointed on the standard of this battle, I was really expecting at this stage of the tourney to see some serious skills. But, neither were very good. Multi's were bad, punches were weak at best, flow was all over the place and lame efforts at nameplay.

Pro Found, a multi is not multiple rhymes in one line, a multi is multiple syllables rhyming in one rhyme, check out the tutorials.


Edit:

You're right iceaxe, I messed it up, i've edited it now, hopefully it makes a little more sense, lol.

[IceAxe]

Structure: Link
Flow: Ehh.. Tie
Punches: Link
Vocab: Pro-found *
Multis: Link, but neither were incredibly good
Rhymes: Tie
Nameplay; Link had more/better quality
Complexity: Tie
Other: Tie

8-5 Link

* 4D, I think, messed up there in his vote. The words he pointed out were used by Pro-found, not Link

[MoBrat]

FLOW -- Link
STRUCTURE -- Link
PUNCHES -- Link
MULTIES -- Link
RHYMES -- Link
VOCAB -- Pro Found
COMPLEXITY -- Tie
NAMEPLAY -- Link
OTHER( enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) -- Link

OVERALL -- 7-2 Link

Pro Found no offence intended Harder punches + better multies would have made for a better battle cause it seemed like u were only talking shit while link was throwing some punches stop talkin about urself and attack ur enemy