This song was written around the beginning of last summer and rerecorded around the end of April 2007.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/3286463dd5c13e/
Do as you wish...











Kojack wrote:You fixed ur microphone ese?
Vettori wrote:You definatly improved since i last heard from u man..good job nice beat....still goin off beat a bit but youll only get better... check my new track and leave feed pce
Tash8 wrote:i think your voice is great man, and ur pronounciation is probably the best i've seen at this site...
but i didn't like this track, i didn't like the beat
and idk but i dont liek the style where you just rhyme every other word.. like
what i find is shut my mind up in line
^ terrible example but you get the idea probably
the songs I have donehave much better structure/rhyming in them even though the style is similar. maybe I can send you one or somehting on msn to show you. 


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