C-Riz - Rain,Thunder...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

another track of C-C-Riz
C-Riz - Rain,Thunder
http://www.zshare.net/audio/3295141dba4e15/

enjoy people and leave feed

[3110]

Not Bad

[Jay_LP1]

well I'm not that kinda who will say hot verse , 10/10 and all that

first of all it was hard to understand what were you sayin , but better than ur mixtape.

verse was not good niether was the hook. beat was ok.

you keep on releasing a new song after a week or so.

give some time to a song.

4/10

[Tash8]

your pronouncation is a huge improvement man keep it up

[C-Game]

lyrics are not clear...

reverb too much...

i like da start..

nothin special about the beat....

chorus .... well the word transition is good but not continue it ... maybe one bar of word transitions and one line of flow... dat would done better...

i havent listened to ur mix tape yet.. still on ma computer...

flow was on and off man....

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

argh damn...guess i put too much hope in this track...thought it would be more decent..
anywayz....thx fo the feed tho....sorry ya couldnt enjoy

@tash...harsh mothafucka lol..j/k
@OBB..yea i prolly should take more time

[mart85]

I didn't think the track was bad... I think it was as good as your other tracks on your tape, but after a tape you must step your game up so yeah, I would suggest spending more time on your next track... work on it until you can't find anything bad in it, and once you feel like everything is good (lyrics, flow, your delivery etc...) then work on it again! lol, to make it even better... that's the best way to improve

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx mart...yea i gonna work so long till its perfect...