wordplay

[Tash8]

you wouldnt noah flow if you built an ark

I saw that on another forum and i thought it was a great punch with nice wordplay

i wonder who will understand this...

[Deadishot]

im not one for all this battlin shit n stuff but i laughed at that haha

i like it and i agree with you

[4D]

That's the beauty of great wordplay, you don't have to explain shit. Very nice pun on Noah/Know a, and of course the flood/flow metaphor. Very simple in appearance, but so rare a nice idea like this comes to ya. Nice post Tash, but I think this is more appropriate in Creative Writing, as this is not a battle, just art appreciation really. I think C-Game should move it, but that's up to him, if he ever decides he's still interested in running these two forums.

P.s Tash, I read this a week ago, and forgot to reply, sorry for the delay. Keep an eye out for clever shit like this in the future, it's nice to read.

[C-Game]

That's the beauty of great wordplay, you don't have to explain shit. Very nice pun on Noah/Know a, and of course the flood/flow metaphor. Very simple in appearance, but so rare a nice idea like this comes to ya. Nice post Tash, but I think this is more appropriate in Creative Writing, as this is not a battle, just art appreciation really. I think C-Game should move it, but that's up to him, if he ever decides he's still interested in running these two forums.

P.s Tash, I read this a week ago, and forgot to reply, sorry for the delay. Keep an eye out for clever shit like this in the future, it's nice to read.

[4D]

[Tash8]

haha yea

[Block]

Funny, where'd you see that? About a year ago I used a wordplay similar, but it was This dude wouldn't "Noah-Sick Punch" if he was "Hitting Terminally-Ill Ark Builders"

Heh.. I love when people use my shit.

[Tash8]

Funny, where'd you see that? About a year ago I used a wordplay similar, but it was This dude wouldn't "Noah-Sick Punch" if he was "Hitting Terminally-Ill Ark Builders"

Heh.. I love when people use my shit.

i like his better..

[Block]

Funny, where'd you see that? About a year ago I used a wordplay similar, but it was This dude wouldn't "Noah-Sick Punch" if he was "Hitting Terminally-Ill Ark Builders"

Heh.. I love when people use my shit.

i like his better..

His is simpler, your mind's simpler.. Makes sense.

[Tash8]

whatever.. not saying urs wasn't sick, i'm just saying his was better IMO

[Block]

whatever.. not saying urs wasn't sick, i'm just saying his was better IMO

It's the exposure, I guess. Sorry if I came off as an asshole. I tend to on this site, lol.

What I'm saying is the 'flow' wordplays have been played for a few years now. anything with flow or something with pussy or whatever. Like an old metaphore I used was I'll "Forcefully eat this pussy" without "raping ya wife"

just shit like that is played.

[Tash8]

ur right, it is a bit overplayed but if you can make something unique out of it being overplayed then it's cool

[bright]

You the best emcee of the world?.....naah you're 'not/knot'
you're imagination is holding you down with a 'rope' on the spot
of illusion, but who 'knows/nose' maybe you will 'smell' some victory
maybe he 'sees/seas' the truht...naah I guess it's still blury
like openin you're eyes under the 'ocean'.

Something I wrote when I was bored

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