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1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby randomghost » Aug 26th, '07, 22:56

here is the download link:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3329702429ecc6/


here is the lyrics:

intro:

they dont know
they dont know
they dont know

hook:

when u be the best...they dont know

when u reach up high...they dont know

when u act so smart...they dont know

when u feel depressed...they dont know

when u hate urself...they dont know

when u feel so happy...they dont know

when u reach the top...they dont know

when u feel lonely...they dont know



verse 1:

they dont know, motherfuckers what am up to. they dont know, motherfuckers if i

will drop 2, ma brain, coz i keep on thinkin, thoughts is sinkin, ma mind is

linkin, i will stay calm for now, but i will hit ma shit loud, they will kill

themselves, to know whats on, how i live and eat with ma shit is on, ma thoughts

are sins, but why u care,


stop sandin there, starin and blare, why u fuckin care,

motherucker u dare, to come any closer, ur just loser who is snoopin and poser,

a bitch ass abuser,

what u will win, if u know everything, is dat rests ur ass,

or it just depends, from now i will offend, every protrusive or obtrusive, snoopy

and intrusive...cheaaa

hook:


verse 2:

i was just talkin to ma girl down the street, told her she is cute and so sweet,

they heard everything, all them snoopers, why they pretend that

they dont know, what makes them think, that i wont know, all the games thats been

played ohh, and all the shit they are sayin, no, dammn something has to be done

now. soo

if every human is like dat, then we cant live, if they are just rats, then who is

brave, in this life, in this world, in these minds, in this thougts, in the

streets, in this roads, in every shit i wrote, dont be sorry now, its to late,

i wont be worried now, coz its ur fate, i wont wait no more, i will straight,

get ma baraattes yeahh and kill them haters

hook:

verse 3:

dont think am soft no, am tuff and ruff, am like a demon in the air, that u will

find out there, where where where, do u really care, do u really feel intersetd

somewhere, u will remain unaccepted, excepted, i will make u sceptic, i will get ya

guts out of ur fuckin stomach, make u bleed, and feel the pain till u die...and feel the

pain till u die

ohh here ya go, get ma secrets out, i dont care no more, coz u are a bitch and whore, a faggot,

a clown, a sissy, a rat, a bitch ass wack, snooper and a prick, and am so motherfuckin sick,

of u fuckin pricks, i hope u all fuckin die, screw u faggots, die die die, haha

die die die motherfuckers..

hook



feed will be much appreciated :happy:
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby Kojack » Aug 26th, '07, 23:05

Its aiiiiight.
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 26th, '07, 23:10

delivery is really good on this...
and verses and hook are kool... :y: hook is pure energy :y: well done
beat is hot....and im lookin forward to ur tape :y:
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby Kez » Aug 26th, '07, 23:33

Typing while listening

Beat fits your style, a melody blown up

Hook is good quality-wise/lyrically, but i'm a bit confused about the hook. I mean what is it? You say "when you reach the top (they don't know)" but i don't understand; if you reached the top they would know about it. Sorry i'm just a bit confused, fill me in.

The verses are great, great flow and lyrics.

Lookin forward to the tape

Good track, 8/10
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby Tash8 » Aug 26th, '07, 23:40

ui'll listen to this when i get back!
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby randomghost » Aug 26th, '07, 23:46

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:delivery is really good on this...
and verses and hook are kool... :y: hook is pure energy :y: well done
beat is hot....and im lookin forward to ur tape :y:
thanx chris..much appreciated :flower:


Kez wrote:Typing while listening

Beat fits your style, a melody blown up

Hook is good quality-wise/lyrically, but i'm a bit confused about the hook. I mean what is it? You say "when you reach the top (they don't know)" but i don't understand; if you reached the top they would know about it. Sorry i'm just a bit confused, fill me in.

The verses are great, great flow and lyrics.

Lookin forward to the tape

Good track, 8/10
what i meant by is: no matter how good or bad u are..they will never know..about it...so when u reach the top...its like when u reach the best u can in rapping...or when u reach a certain level..u wont let them know about it..and they will neve know how good u are :happy: ..anyways,,thanx for the feed kez.. :flower:
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 27th, '07, 00:56

the beat is 100% random ghost style

the track is good, but I wouldn't have used this one as a single

I mean the lyrics are tight, the concept is good, the strucrue is kool, the flow was not the best, but still good enough to enjoy....

excelent track, but I would've had used a happier track 4 a single
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby randomghost » Aug 27th, '07, 00:59

30-3 wrote:the beat is 100% random ghost style

the track is good, but I wouldn't have used this one as a single

I mean the lyrics are tight, the concept is good, the strucrue is kool, the flow was not the best, but still good enough to enjoy....

excelent track, but I would've had used a happier track 4 a single
i figured out to change from club beat..anyways...amd thanx x...much appreictaed :flower:
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby Phantom » Aug 27th, '07, 01:39

hook is offbeat before you say they dont know

verses r str8, quality is str8 lyrics are good

good substance of the track id say re-record maybe
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby randomghost » Aug 27th, '07, 01:42

Phantom wrote:hook is offbeat before you say they dont know

verses r str8, quality is str8 lyrics are good

good substance of the track id say re-record maybe
thanks man...i will try to re-record it again :y:
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby Mc Cubz » Aug 27th, '07, 06:02

i feed on ur myspace :y:
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby randomghost » Aug 27th, '07, 16:55

Mc Cubz wrote:i feed on ur myspace :y:
thanks cubz :8)
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby mart85 » Aug 28th, '07, 17:28

Phantom wrote:hook is offbeat before you say they dont know

verses r str8, quality is str8 lyrics are good

good substance of the track id say re-record maybe


yeah I also noticed the hook sounded slightly off beat, to me atleast... but you had good delivery/energy in your voice :y: and tight verses... pretty cool track randy I liked it :y:
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby randomghost » Aug 28th, '07, 17:35

mart85 wrote:
Phantom wrote:hook is offbeat before you say they dont know

verses r str8, quality is str8 lyrics are good

good substance of the track id say re-record maybe


yeah I also noticed the hook sounded slightly off beat, to me atleast... but you had good delivery/energy in your voice :y: and tight verses... pretty cool track randy I liked it :y:
thanks mart...appreciated :flower: :flower:
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Re: 1st Single of Thousand Times...They Don't Know...

Postby Xray » Aug 29th, '07, 06:00

Dope track bro

all verses were tight chorus was some good shit :y: catchy too great track to listen to man ima defanately be bumping this track for some time now :smoking:

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