(Verse redone)Intentions of rap - MC cubs ft. Vettori & Jrey

[Kojack]

Dunno man. I mean its a good song, but Vet sounds too much like Eminem it aint even cool. Rhymes and flow n shit they all good, but its something i dunno. Hopefully Cubs sounds original enuff to steal the light.

[C-Game]

1st verse is sick ... cld have used a better pop filter though.. but no complaints..

chorus.. not ma type... a lil mello .. soothes the song ..

2nd verse is sick.. sick.. flow was sick...lyrics was sick as well...

3rd verse ( i didnt hear any breath noises ) .. flow was excellent..... sick lyrics cubz

all were good... no complaints

didnt like da chorus that much but the song deserves a good spot ...

[Vettori]

Thanks for the feedback...and kojack ...what i sound like i cant help...It's comferting to me how i rap...I do get the sound like eminem thing alot...But i have to deal with it...Eminem made it sorta hard for people like me...But just a challenge i like...cause i get to try and sound differant...and i may sound similar in a way just because i listened to him growin up he is my inspiration...as well as tupac (personally i dont feel like i sound like him) but maybe im monotone
and thx cgame ...I actually really like the chorus i didnt expect to hear sumthin like that haha...But everyone has there own view of it...I just like this song cause i managed to stay on point Thx tho mad respect


PS:i dont intentionally try to sound like eminem...its just how i rap..but thx for the feed pce

[Kojack]

I didnt say you intentionally do it. Maybe its a white thing, like how all Houston rappers sound similar.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Thx everyone...yea small faults in it..but overall i like it :P .....the feedback does help...

Bar thx for that Much respect....and random ghost ..for sure like i said im down for collabs...Just all i ask is try to bring Your "A" game

PS: New version of thesong up...MC cubs redid his verse ima up it in a sec

yo, thanx for the respect there man, i got alot of time for you since back awile ago you gave me a much needed confidence boost ya know

but anywae, ill check the new re-done version tomorrow im to drunk right now lol but thx for the respect man

[Vettori]

haha np :P nice to know i helped somehow feels good pce man

[Vettori]

Alright thx alot for the feedback guys.... thx sarah ....Ill try harder to improve next time...

[HAYZI]

fuckin great song i love that beat, the chorus is nice man, every verse is on point, Cubz your real man reppin it big!! as impressed as i always am!

vettori i enjoyed your verse man youve come a long way and i enjoy your music i still play test my limits from time to time!

[B.A.D.]

the beat is nice!!!

verse 1-
//nice flow and structure mayn, cool thang never heard from jrey before, he's good, nice lyrics

hook
// wow, I thought I was the only one that could sing on this site lol, nice hook

verse 2-
// amazing verse, the quality is better here than on the first dunno why, the flow is amazing bro!!

verse 3-
// again loving the hook, mc cubz is good.. nice verse, the flow is good but easy, I don't understand a lot of what u say cuz of ur accent, but its cool keep it like that, nice rhymes

great track man

if ya want me to sing a hook 4 u, or drop a verse lemme know

[Mc Cubz]

thanks for the feed regarding my verse, nice one hayzi btw we soooo need to collab man i bin looking for u for ages lol, erm about understanding my accent thts a shame lol, i try and b clear in wht i say, if u want ne of the lyrics il send them but, hope u likes the general feel of the song

[B.A.D.]

thanks for the feed regarding my verse, nice one hayzi btw we soooo need to collab man i bin looking for u for ages lol, erm about understanding my accent thts a shame lol, i try and b clear in wht i say, if u want ne of the lyrics il send them but, hope u likes the general feel of the song

its kool

ur accent is what distinguish u from other rappers

I'm jus sayin I'm not used to it.. lol

but amazing verse by the way

[Vettori]

Thx alot lol..Thx hayzi, yea we put some effort into this... My boys comming out with another video, songs catchy lol, And i'm appearing in it but not rapping... Just cillin....But when im able to release it ill come hear asap lol.... anyways thx alot guys Much appreaciated ..Pce ...