Rain Man Grinch

[Tash8]

Title: Rain Man Grinch
Lyrics:
R Ready for war and ready to ingrave [it]
A acknowledge my name or end up inslaved
I i'm ready to show i'm fearless with hate
N no rain can wash up my spirt or fate
you couldn't roc-a-pella if you was jay-z
pause the rain cause people wanna play me
fi eh edam ecens [read it backwords] then people'll go crazy
this ain't poet's corner so bitch leave
rap like rap is meant to be
and fuck yea i'm in love with them wordplays
do you know what they mean in the first, place?
and another quick thing, ITS FUCKIN PAINTIME
and now i know why u called urself rain time
cause you couldn't spit hot but i can bitch
because i'm the fuckin sun, yes i'm apollo; which,
proves that my father is the fuckin rain man grinch

Listen:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/35137543ff9dbb/

this is for the battle i'm doing with rain.. it's not a beef or anything for those idiots out there who think that verse was anything good cuz it sucks

lyrics are no where near my best but people keep telling me to go with simple lyrics to improve and yea i think i'm improving...

so i posted it here so i can get feed which i doubt i will over at the audio battle.

[Tash8]

no one ?

[IceAxe]

First... is the choir sampled? If not can you send me what ever you?

The beat it's self should've been quieter, it kinda overpowers your voice

your flow kinda fell off at the end. Last two lines didn't make a whole lot of sense.... The break down of R-A-I-N was a nice touch, but not too original, but if you did it outta respect or whatever it's all good. Your flow's better than the last time I heard you.... rhymes overall were ok, they serve they purpose here.

[Tash8]

First... is the choir sampled? If not can you send me what ever you?

The beat it's self should've been quieter, it kinda overpowers your voice

your flow kinda fell off at the end. Last two lines didn't make a whole lot of sense.... The break down of R-A-I-N was a nice touch, but not too original, but if you did it outta respect or whatever it's all good. Your flow's better than the last time I heard you.... rhymes overall were ok, they serve they purpose here.

thanks

i was trying to do the ether thing I will not lose except i changed it up to his name

i didn't make that beat so i dont really know.

[Xray]

damn bro if it wasnt for youre lyrics i wouldnt of understood wat u were sayin ur pronounciation is very poor man u needa work alot on that..it seems like ur tongue is caught wen ur rapping or somfin....<<<dont hate me for this im just giving u the heads up so u can fix these mixtakes

[Tash8]

damn bro if it wasnt for youre lyrics i wouldnt of understood wat u were sayin ur pronounciation is very poor man u needa work alot on that..it seems like ur tongue is caught wen ur rapping or somfin....<<<dont hate me for this im just giving u the heads up so u can fix these mixtakes

thanks a bunch man, pronounciation is always been one of my problem, but i'ma try to fix it

thx again

[Xray]

^^cool man no worries man everybody got problems

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

was nice man good energy..but ur pronounciation isnt the best too..and always complainin about my pronounciation..lol

[Tash8]

was nice man good energy..but ur pronounciation isnt the best too..and always complainin about my pronounciation..lol

thx for feed

ain't complainin just gving u feed

[mart85]

yeah it kinda sounds like you wanted to have a strong delivery but the pronounciation suffered a bit from that... and I thought the flow could have been a little more on time with the beat at some parts, but other than that it was cool man

[CaptivatingVokalz]

I love the beat but it overpowered your voice...when using a strong heavy beat like that-your voice has to come equipped with it-must be strong and heavy as well. Work on delivery and pronounication... the lyrics were nice... and the last two lines did make sense to me? The "sun" apollo- for those of you who don't know-it's greek mythology and apollo is the God of the sun/light and music/poetry...and I think you meant sun in two ways-as in "son" too... because you meantioned your father is the rain man grinch...which means the person who calls themselves the rain man...well your father crushes them I THINK I GOT IT

[Tash8]

I love the beat but it overpowered your voice...when using a strong heavy beat like that-your voice has to come equipped with it-must be strong and heavy as well. Work on delivery and pronounication... the lyrics were nice... and the last two lines did make sense to me? The "sun" apollo- for those of you who don't know-it's greek mythology and apollo is the God of the sun/light and music/poetry...and I think you meant sun in two ways-as in "son" too... because you meantioned your father is the rain man grinch...which means the person who calls themselves the rain man...well your father crushes them I THINK I GOT IT

haha nice, u got it

yea the last two lines weren't so forward

and thanks yea, my pronouncation was horrible on thsi one.

[ThomasAguanis]

listening now:
like this beat

you're really hard to understand. the beat is way too loud for you pella and you need to be more clear or mix your pellas better.you're flow seemed off and on throughout but you can improve that with practice. On reading the lyrics over/listening the second time, you had some very clever/creative lines in there. keep it up man, you'll only improve over time

[Tash8]

thanks man

will improve...

[die2nite]

Hmm. Beat is hot, I think I downloaded that off SC too. As other's said pronunciation is horrible, and I think that's also because the quality is pretty bad. Flow ain't too hot either, a lot of stopping here and there for no reason.

fi eh edam ecens = snece made he if "then people'll go crazy"

What the heck does that mean?

Not bad though, keep practicing