Book Of Rhymes

[ThomasAguanis]

was gonna be on my tape but I decided against putting it on there so here ya go:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3532670f4e04fa/

[Tash8]

i'm really not feelin ur style but it was a dope track though

good job on that

[IceAxe]

Sick rhymes as usual.... flow was nice, but at some points it got repetitive, but that's mainly cuz of the words used I think.

Other than that, good work. Lookin forward to ya tape

[Block]

Alotta use of multies, but I felt they coulda been incorperated together better. Real nice bro, I'd of liked to see some more metas in there tho but that's just my style, I love real lyrical shit. I'd suffer flow for some lyrical shit any day. Nice track tho bro, I'mma hit you up for that mixing.

[die2nite]

Damn. This is hot bro. Multies as you already know are great, although some parts don't make sense and sort of "just for the sake". Nice flow though, you put that little loop to work and did great. This is bomb shit . Your talking voice is so different from your rapping voice, just felt like putting that out there.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

lyrics are awesome, flow was good, was a nice track but you got alot better stuff

[Kez]

Great, new Thomas shit

Can't be arsed breaking it all down but everything about it was real good so 9.5/10

[mart85]

i liked it was a good track. nuttin like the majouraty of your songs tho that are normally alot better in my opinion. i didnt like the beat thing going on either but i assume thats cos u couldnt find the proper beat or sumin 7/10

yeah I agree, it was nice, but I prefered other tracks from you... still good tho

good job on the multies, but like kblock said, I think you should try to incorporate them a little better, and maybe try to make them sound a little less "obvious"... cause like iceaxe said, the flow may sound repetitive because of that <<<<<<< that's my constructive feed lol

[Mc Cubz]

good, one of my favourites also, liked the mixing, the sound quality is reli heigh - i have ur mic but cant get sum a nice sound, i like it so much i wish i cud use it for my tape sumhow, with a back2back of me n u remix, how wud u feel about it.

on another note, re: ur style cos sum1 els commented on it I think.
at times because of the rhyming repeating so reguarly per unit amount of muiscal bars, it can destract the listener from the messages in the lyrics, but I dont think this is a bad thing cos its like i can relax and just enjoy ur voice/style, sum1 once sed to me u sound like eminem but i think u onli sound like urself in both voice/style, this track kind of opitomises ur style, thts y i love it, and want it on my tape, i fink ur sick as fuk!

i like the lyrics on it, paticularly the lost my mind one

[Mc Cubz]

btw i also like how on this the lyrics u use/beat lol i duno but

i can hear each individual word, u have become more clear and understandable in wht ur saying.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lyrics are awesome, flow was good, was a nice track but you got alot better stuff

^wut he said

[Mc Cubz]

by the way tom - i used a lyric very similar to urs about the concepts of every1s tears being the same
in a song about africa ive dun but am holding for my tape, just so no1 finks am bitin but ur neva on msn or tr much dese days man

[B.A.D.]

I think I've heard that beat before lol

nice intro lol haha

nice rhymes on it, the flow is very good , the lyrics are good to, just my style of lyricing and tracking so I'm luving this

nice to hear again from you...

the emotion is my fav thing on this track

[ThomasAguanis]

thanks everyone for the comments. about the lyrics- they were really just random parts of verses I never finished and wrote before last april (song was recorded last april) in case anyone thought I just wrote these to the beat intentionally (most were in a book too haha)
@cubz- sorry man but I've been busy and don't have much time to be on (also why I didn't quote everyone separately like I like to do) and don't feel up to it most of the time. give me a few weeks and I should have more free time.

thanks a lot again to everyone. I wanna release 3 songs I have that I think are my best but I'mma have to save them for later


edit: @ax- the beat is from the Nas song- Book Of Rhymes. and thanks for the comments

[Vettori]

What maybe said.....But man you use a hella lot of multi's...I wanna hear what youd sound like making a meaningful song, w/o a million multis lol...Just more of a normal oneUve definatly improved since i last heard from you, which out of embarrasement was like a year and a half ago >.< ....But try not using so many multis and ud actually sound pretty decent i think...Just with multis it doesnt always let you say what you gotta yanno...there forced alot of the times, but like i said ive definatly seen improvement

Good job man keep that shit up