SSquared - "White Hot" - Bang-bang-banger

[Tash8]

nah i dont see dick ridin, what would anyone benefit from dick-riding him ?

your first part was fine but

i'll bet you, you'll ignore this feed and just get high from the other feed on here, while this is the most important feed here

that was harsh

well i figured he's like eveyrone else here, who just ignores the feed and comes back the next time with the same exact problems. hopefully he's diff.

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forgot to feed

multis were strong on this and made sense

flow is choppy, witch works at parts on the beat but it sounds some times you fall n slip a little to often

but i aint saying its bad, its a good flow just tryna give pointers


i dont like this track anymore than the ones from your first tape, but ill be looking out for your next mixtape man, keep it up

[HAYZI]

i wasnt too crazy about this the flow was too choppy all the way through it wudve worked someof the time but you over did it i thought which kinda killed it it became very monotonous by about half way thru and i wasnt really feelin the hook, im not hatin or nothin i heard one of your tracks before and quite liked it just this one wasnt really for me, keep workin tho

[C-Game]

well its a unique flow u started off with.. so props to dat..
cld had more variations to leave da monotonous feel out..

but lyrrically it had some good multies mate..

i hv never heard of u before.. but lukin 4ward for ur stuff..

[die2nite]

Ey sorry, for not replying to all the feed earlier. Been busy as hell for me the past few weeks with building a new computer, school starting, soccer starting, and all this other bs you don't care about

And man Tash, why'd you have to blue ball me like that, I was just about to blow...asshole

And yea, if you heard my last tape you'd know I've never made a song like this before but it's all about experimenting with new styles and seeing what works and what doesn't. I don't expect everyone to like it, nor am I only going to listen to the good feed. Personally, I like the flow. I wouldn't expect myself to use it on another song, and I can indeed see how one can find it monotonous and annoying after a while, understandable.

Anyways, thanks for the feed guys, and I promise I'll hit you all up with feed back as well as post some new stuff very soon.

ps. I was just fucking with you Tash, I appreciate your being an asshole