FLOW - Mobrat
STRUCTURE - Mobrat, Rain had neater lines but all the commas mess up the flow/structure.
PUNCHES - Mobrat, had some good personals
MULTIES - Rain, even though Hemisphere and ..ment gear don't rhyme cuzza da missin' syllable
RHYMES - Rain, had more rhymes and better ones.
VOCAB - Rain, not by a long way though
COMPLEXITY - Rain, a more complex rhyme
NAMEPLAY - Rain, Mobrat just had the one nameplay in the 5th line.
Vote: Rain. Good effort though Mobrat had some nice disses, just need to work on your complexity!
