You Never Know

[dbeauluvswomen]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3844427fcf6635/

This is another song I wrote about the hurricane. I've made a few, but this one takes a different approach. I talk about how I'm glad it hit because I hated my hometown and it was nice to live in new areas and meet new people. Things were going great until I moved to Mississippi...

Duration: 3:44
Song: You Never Know
Produced By: Anno Domini

I understand some say my vocals don't sound too good and I know that. Any feedback other than that would be much appreciated. Also, I recorded the first verse and chorus over 2 months ago so you may notice a vocal change for a second in the middle of verse 2 because I finished it today...thank you

[dbeauluvswomen]

Lyrics are good, beat was decent.. chorus was terrible..and your voice is kind of annoying...

haha, thanks...and honestly i hate the chorus myself..im terrible when it comes to a chorus

gah, one day i'll make a good track lol

[DelinQuent]

1st verse was hott, lyrics were good. flow was good.
chorus... nahhh lol
2nd verse was hotttttt, loved the rat in a maze line.
3rd verse was short but it was good.
great job.

[sinemm]

the beat sounds very very cool& sweet and totally fits the flow i think..verses're pretty..and you sound cool 2 just maybe should've worked on the chorus more..the voices were like too complex.. and sounded like chorus didnt have a flow
since im not so knowledged about these stuff the things i say may not mean alot but anyway
but other than that it was a nice song

[dbeauluvswomen]

I'm sorry for the late reply..I've just been busy. I would like to thank all who left feedback. It's much appreciated and after taking time to hear yall talk about how bad the chorus was I actually took a listen lol..yeah, it really doesnt fit so I'm definately on my way to make it something different. Once again, thank you. Oh and McMaybe yeah I can't come close to singing and I don't know why I tried..just seemed like it fit at the time. When you said my voice was terrible though I was like damn now I don't wanna make another track haa plus when i recorded this i just woke up. Thank you..