


anyways, good job on this tape, just keep doing what you do man

Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
HAYZI wrote:ill give a more in depth review in a couple of days if i can i havent quite finished the album and i dont have the album on this computer i have the internet for.
from waht i heard u have very strong concepts and very good hooks, i loved ur story tellin in the track with the yardie chick. i think ur ideas were great altho some of ur verses were spat a lil too fast partly because ur pronounciation needs a bit of attention and partly cos of the sound quality
the singing was good in parts but at times seemed a lil lazy/sloppy and shud have had a bit more attention to detail but u do write a fukin goos hook
overall it was a strong tape and i think uve got a lot more to come, i dont see u runnin out of things to say anytime soon, keep up the work and work on gettin ur pronounciationa bit moe clear maybe slowin down ur flow wud be useful, like that pain in my words i think it was where u start off about u and ur brother sufferin wud of been great but the beat was too fast for that type of track imo, ultimately like most of us underground artist ur biggest downfall is your soundquality it will make all the difference when it gets better
keep workin man, i enjoy ur stuff ur very creative which is a great asset for an artist
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
30-3 wrote:HAYZI wrote:ill give a more in depth review in a couple of days if i can i havent quite finished the album and i dont have the album on this computer i have the internet for.
from waht i heard u have very strong concepts and very good hooks, i loved ur story tellin in the track with the yardie chick. i think ur ideas were great altho some of ur verses were spat a lil too fast partly because ur pronounciation needs a bit of attention and partly cos of the sound quality
the singing was good in parts but at times seemed a lil lazy/sloppy and shud have had a bit more attention to detail but u do write a fukin goos hook
overall it was a strong tape and i think uve got a lot more to come, i dont see u runnin out of things to say anytime soon, keep up the work and work on gettin ur pronounciationa bit moe clear maybe slowin down ur flow wud be useful, like that pain in my words i think it was where u start off about u and ur brother sufferin wud of been great but the beat was too fast for that type of track imo, ultimately like most of us underground artist ur biggest downfall is your soundquality it will make all the difference when it gets better
keep workin man, i enjoy ur stuff ur very creative which is a great asset for an artist
man.... I can't find any way to thank you enough, I wish all the people like you really paid that much attention to the album wich reflects some fucked up things bout my life, and the way you say I can really make it sound like that makes me so fuckin glad bout it, thanks a lot man
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, I just found out a way to improve my quality big time, so thank God that won't be a problem anymore... the hooks is my most important goal at the time, cuz I love singing... but yeah, I should work a lot on my pronunciation, thanks a lot again man
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