Dreams Come True - SSquared

[die2nite]

Hey, whatsup ya'll. Long time no see, but I'm back with an inspirational, gotta win type of track

SSquared - Dreams Come True - What No One Dared: Vol. 2

http://www.zshare.net/audio/4185106e643012/

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

nice track man flow is kool and lyrcis are okay
likin da chorus

[ek_iz_backk]

i luved the beat and ur voice waas kinda annoying but at the same time it was alrite

good track

[Call Me Pik]

chorus kinda sounded like u were trying to sing to hard

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

chorus - dont like it man, nice idea but i dont think it works maybe if you tried to flow it more as a rap chorus instead of the melody type thing

Verse 1 - flow is pretty nice man, delivery is good aswell, lyrics are pretty good aswell think it could be more lyrical though

verse 2 - flow is good again, delivery is kool again, think the lyrics sound better on this better rhyming

verse 3 - flow again good same as delivery, lyrics are pretty much the same as the rest


overall - beat is sorta hectic, and it needs to be mixed better so we can hear your lyrics better, pronouncation seems muffles sometimes but it could be mixing, rhymes sounded nuce but ive heard better, chorus wasnt the greatest, keep it up though man

[Jay-19]

I agree with the others on the chorus, you shuld try to rap it.

But the rest of the song I really, really like. Great flow and I like your voice alot. The beat is "bopable"... So yeah, great track, except the hook, wich I didn't like.