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Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby randomghost » Oct 21st, '07, 10:16

the album is 85% done...like 4 or 3 tracks left....and just waitin for all collabs verses to be sended...


verse 1: me
hook: me & Sajjad
verse 2: Sajjad
verse 3: Bar

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http://www.zshare.net/audio/43498578ca4ec7/


feed will be much appreciated :happy:
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 21st, '07, 12:25

nice track..... :y: lyrics are kool overall
bar came good... liked his verse most... :whistle: :y:
hook fits nice.... two voices work fine

ps: beat was already used by SSquard :whistle: :whistle: but its kool tho
was hard to listen since the catchy SSquard version kept stuckin in my mind :p
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby Tash8 » Oct 21st, '07, 16:52

the overlays were really bad, u gotta make sure the pitch is the same as the verse otherwise don't use the overlays..

your verse is pretty nice, but just the overlays are bad

hook would be nice if you guys had panned your verses...

sajjad!!! a new fuckin style, nice job.. your verse is hot

bar, nice flow, i guess your back.... good verse.
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 21st, '07, 20:33

random - nice verse flow was kool and lyrics were nice, youve had better but this was still good

hook - sounds better with the 2 voices :y:

sajjad - sick verse man flow is awesome and delivery is great, sick shit man :y:

bar - piss :n:



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forgot, thanx for the feed back guys :worship:
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby HAYZI » Oct 21st, '07, 20:46

track was pretty good if this was posted a year ago it wud probly be quite a big tune here but id give it 7/10

randoms verse 6/10

sajjad 8/10

bar 7/10

hook 7/10
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby randomghost » Oct 22nd, '07, 06:48

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:nice track..... :y: lyrics are kool overall
bar came good... liked his verse most... :whistle: :y:
hook fits nice.... two voices work fine

ps: beat was already used by SSquard :whistle: :whistle: but its kool tho
was hard to listen since the catchy SSquard version kept stuckin in my mind :p
mad props bro :flower: :flower:



Tash8 wrote:the overlays were really bad, u gotta make sure the pitch is the same as the verse otherwise don't use the overlays..

your verse is pretty nice, but just the overlays are bad

hook would be nice if you guys had panned your verses...

sajjad!!! a new fuckin style, nice job.. your verse is hot

bar, nice flow, i guess your back.... good verse.
much appreciated man.. :flower: :happy:


,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:random - nice verse flow was kool and lyrics were nice, youve had better but this was still good

hook - sounds better with the 2 voices :y:

sajjad - sick verse man flow is awesome and delivery is great, sick shit man :y:

bar - piss :n:



edit:

forgot, thanx for the feed back guys :worship:
thanx Bar..an i think ur verse is pretty good man.. :y: couldnt do the track widout ya :8)


HAYZI wrote:track was pretty good if this was posted a year ago it wud probly be quite a big tune here but id give it 7/10

randoms verse 6/10

sajjad 8/10

bar 7/10

hook 7/10
much appreciated man :flower: :flower:
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby mart85 » Oct 22nd, '07, 16:34

cool track... My favorite verse was Sajjad's verse but Bar and Random your verses were nice too...the hook was cool but would have been better if they were panned like Tash said :y:

anyways, good job on this track guys :y:
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby Kez » Oct 22nd, '07, 16:58

Random: Good verse, i liked the delivery a LOT
Some funny lines

Hook: Decent. Quality sounds a bit shit sometimes, but still good

Sajjad: Good verse
Great lines/punches

Bar: Good verse from Bar too
Some good multis
Good all over

Overall: 9/10
Good verses from all, my favourite was Random's though
Quality on Random's part can be a bit crap, but i sympathise
Beat is great
Can't wait for the tape
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby Phantom » Oct 22nd, '07, 22:35

i think this song is a lil too much alike to dont approach me from em and xzibit..

your voice was good random, hook is catchy, pretty nice n funny lyrics from ya

sajjad-your verse is killer, very good presence on the mic, lyrics are good..so far your the best

bar-lyrics r pretty good, i dont think your voice has enough "mean" in it, flow is good, lil choppy at parts

overral, i think this song is tight as hell, sajjad killed it tho

8.5/10

nice job guys
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby Xray » Oct 23rd, '07, 03:09

tight song man..random = dopeness....Sajjad = sad mafucker Bar = geniousness

dope song :worship:

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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby randomghost » Oct 23rd, '07, 06:34

mart85 wrote:cool track... My favorite verse was Sajjad's verse but Bar and Random your verses were nice too...the hook was cool but would have been better if they were panned like Tash said :y:

anyways, good job on this track guys :y:
mad thanx bro :flower:


Kez wrote:Random: Good verse, i liked the delivery a LOT
Some funny lines

Hook: Decent. Quality sounds a bit shit sometimes, but still good

Sajjad: Good verse
Great lines/punches

Bar: Good verse from Bar too
Some good multis
Good all over

Overall: 9/10
Good verses from all, my favourite was Random's though
Quality on Random's part can be a bit crap, but i sympathise
Beat is great
Can't wait for the tape
mad thanx kez... :worship: feed is appreciated :flower:

Phantom wrote:i think this song is a lil too much alike to dont approach me from em and xzibit..

your voice was good random, hook is catchy, pretty nice n funny lyrics from ya

sajjad-your verse is killer, very good presence on the mic, lyrics are good..so far your the best

bar-lyrics r pretty good, i dont think your voice has enough "mean" in it, flow is good, lil choppy at parts

overral, i think this song is tight as hell, sajjad killed it tho

8.5/10

nice job guys
much appreciated bro :flower:


Sajjad wrote:tight song man..random = dopeness....Sajjad = sad mafucker Bar = geniousness

dope song :worship:

thanx for downloading people THOUSAND TIMES BUMP!!!!!!!!
thanx man..u did great in this track :y:
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby bg_pop » Oct 24th, '07, 12:02

Verse 1
Well i like it :)
I hear some elements for rapping like Em and Snoop :)
I like it
Verse 2 is good too :)

Verse 3
Hay bar :) Nice to hear you again :)WE must do the best to make other song together

The chorus is great :P

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If you clean the quality of the acapellas will be perfect I don't think this is the best from you about the quality This is the only main problem for me
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby randomghost » Oct 25th, '07, 10:48

bg_pop wrote:Verse 1
Well i like it :)
I hear some elements for rapping like Em and Snoop :)
I like it
Verse 2 is good too :)

Verse 3
Hay bar :) Nice to hear you again :)WE must do the best to make other song together

The chorus is great :P

:worship:
:)

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If you clean the quality of the acapellas will be perfect I don't think this is the best from you about the quality This is the only main problem for me
:)
thanx man..much appreciated :worship: :worship:
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby Restlesswon » Oct 26th, '07, 05:03

aye downloadin now.pow, looks crazy.
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Re: Go Away Ft. Sajjad & Bar ( From Thousand Times)

Postby randomghost » Oct 28th, '07, 10:18

Restlesswon wrote:aye downloadin now.pow, looks crazy.
thanx :happy:
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