IceAxe vs bodaciousent [IA 3-0]

[IceAxe]

11 bars

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[bodaciousent]

11

[bodaciousent]

ima chick but don't under estamate me
ima chick who's an emcee
and ill rip anyone who steps to me
lyrically and phycally
so watch your back
before you come up on the mic talking smack
I can be content until someone pisses me off
then you'll pay the price and won't like the cost
I been through shit all my life
so its hard for me to stay possitive shits never right
but still nothing gets to me so if you wanna battle me
go head cause ill beat you once then ill beat you again

-Bodacious

[IceAxe]

12 bars ( odd # of bars doesn't sit right with me lol)

you think you can rumble with me? I'll put you leagues under the sea
you Nemo there's no sunderin me, this lyrical arson burn this MC

if you got to Shady Records you'd be the worst in the roster
you're cursed to get slaughtered like the birth of a gallus

I raise the stakes to raze the fake you can rave, debate but never take the cake
what i make'll break what you place to tape, rip ya shit like gettin raped with rakes

I feel sorry you think you equal to this, I'll burn you like an eagle and shit
at a feverous pitch, on forth and herewith there wont be a sequel to this

why'd you come all feable and shit i can see now that you weak in this shit
mwhy'd i even permit you to speak in my midst this week you will cease to exist

you cant contend with a Nephilim giant, it's self defeating like benevolent tyrants
you really should stay level compliant, cuz you'll fall while I stand in triumph


EX:

got to Shady Records - "I want to get signed to Shady Records"
gallus - chickens, birds bred for food, etc... (very slight rhyme I know)
Nemo - Latin for "nobody"/ the Captain from 20,000 leagues under the sea

anything else -- http://www.google.com

eh... shit sucks lol. good luck

[bodaciousent]

LOL okay.. Do we go again and wait for people to vote?

[Rain Matrix]

flow- iceaxe but bodacious was on point
metaphors- iceaxe, raped by a rake line was good
rhymes- iceaxe
creativity- bodacious, she needs more substance
multi's- iceaxe
complexity- iceaxe

iceaxe wins 5-1

bodacious has potential with better structure and some hard punches

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FLOW - ice axe
STRUCTURE - ice axe
PUNCHES - ice axe
MULTIES - ice axe
RHYMES - ice axe
VOCAB - ice axe
COMPLEXITY - ice axe
NAMEPLAY - i didnt notice any prominit name play
OTHER - enjoyed ice axe's more

Vote - ice axe

bodaciousent. yours wasnt extrememly bad, it just wasnt good for a text battle, and it never helped that you were up against one of the best text battlers on the site. you had potential just got to read more text battles and see how it works then practice it more

[bodaciousent]

Im more better with real battles not online battles..I usually win almost every real battle im in on the streets and didn't know there was any rules to text battling I thought it was the same but I guess cuz u can't hear me flow it's different..but thanks

[C-Game]

Im more better with real battles not online battles..I usually win almost every real battle im in on the streets and didn't know there was any rules to text battling I thought it was the same but I guess cuz u can't hear me flow it's different..but thanks

yea on text ur lyrics are scrutinized.. so u gotta fill up the cats as much as u can

wen ur doin ur thang on the streets its basically about flow , punches and ur end rhymes ...

anyway good job in ur trshady debut..
but IA just got it..

[bodaciousent]

with IA he used way to much big words in a battle you want to use big words but not in all sentences.. and also he needed to rhyme more. Other wise his was good but never knew text battling was different.

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with IA he used way to much big words in a battle you want to use big words but not in all sentences.. and also he needed to rhyme more. Other wise his was good but never knew text battling was different.

well in audio battles, your got the whole delivery and getting the crowd goin wit sick punchlines, in text text battles instead of having delivery and stuff, you got to pack it with multi's and wordplay to make it complex

[bodaciousent]

Oh ok I thought they was all the same

Thanks though better luck next time! I aint into using BIG words and big vocab in every line though maybe some but um if anyone else wants to challenge me ill try. Im better with street battling though! lol im better with street everything

[Enimee]

shyyyytttt i called winners on this didnt i ? lol ite axe if ur down ill drop summin in anotha topic well go wit wut 5 bars?

[IceAxe]

5 sounds good. I'm busy with other stuff atm so I'll have it in when I get a chance

[bodaciousent]

IceAxe takes in all cats

Im sorry, but for a rap battler you suck. And dont give us that im better and win every battle blah blah blah bullshit. Writing gives you time, freestyle batt;ing doesnt, if anything your punchlines should have been better.

You really got a problem with me huh? lol your always dissing on me..I find it funny cuz you don't know me yet your wasting your time hating on me and your gonna feel stupid when something happens with me..but its all good with me..this battle was done with he already won and your late on voting.and just for the record it takes me not even 5 min to come up with a full 4 min song.. Thanks anyways