Doe Ray Me .:VS:. Enimee Part 2 [VOTE]

[Doe Ray Me]

10 lines, 3-0 = ko, otherwise first to 5

you better bring sum good shit, cos i aint gonna easy on ya this time

[Enimee]

waitin for u killa

[Enimee]

u got two days til;l u forfeit i aint waiting for u to perfect ur shyt no longer drop so i can fuckin write my verse...



please?

[Doe Ray Me]

hold the fuck up, jus sortin out sum personal shit, i'll drop asap tho

[Doe Ray Me]

'Second-time-around', your getting 'knocked-out'/
you 'reckon-im-a-clown', but you the one frontin, like you on the 'top-now'/

Fuck that 'soft-shit', you know im coming 'straight-for-you'/
and i dont need no help, i 'got-this', but if you need sum, i'll 'deface-your-crew'/

No 'plans-required' to 'defeat-this-enimee'/
cos he been doing this for years with no 'fans-acquired', so im gonna 'deplete-his-energy'/

You better 'shut-ya-mouth', saying my styles 'played-out'/
cos i didnt come here to 'fuck-about', and everybody knows this got ya shook, like how the 12 'gauge-sounds'/

like a 'game-of-chess', this shit is 'check-mate'/
cos im throwing punches so 'dangerous', it'll make your 'neck-break'/

there ya go, dont care if i lose lol, got more important shit to do

[Enimee]

welp this should be easy now that your finally finished dicking around
i can get to rippin u apart like the back of this disk i just found

cuz like a disk in ur back that gets slipped u get hit- the only straight fag that sips on the crack
of another dude thats jus sick and its wack u completed the script im jus flippin it back

so "Will" how does it feel ur what 35-36 and gonna get votes next ta nil
against a kid 16 who would flex and kill like godzilla im str8 next to destilled

water that i drowned ur girl natalie pregnent wit ur daughter blood floatin cuz of how i dishonored
her father so now she's weepin in the womb my words jus burned cuz my shitz hotter

stinkin like a skunk ate pacino ur baisically just thoughts crammed im finished wit messin
ur worse then a drunk philipino with no god damned english lessons



"i can get to rippin u apart like the back of this disk i just found"-when u take music off a cd and put it on a computer its called "ripping the cd" and the back is where the data is kept
"crammed im finished wit messin"- messing around that is


the rest shud be pretty much str8 forward



oh and ps: u suck

[shady4life!]

rippin u apart

no if u meant it as a simile then u shud not hav included "apart", cuz u rip CD's u dont rip them apart

sips on the crack

justification plzzz wat does that exactly mean? he sips coffe on top of an ass crack or do u mean he sips shit out of a guys ass..... hmmm still a lil bit confusin plzzz be more specific.

u completed the script im jus flippin it back

dont get it... wat exactly do u mean....

ur what 35-36

how do u know how old he is? I think ur mistaken i've seen his pic and he did not look that old

water that i drowned ur girl natalie pregnent wit ur daughter blood floatin cuz of how i dishonored
her father so now she's weepin in the womb my words jus burned cuz my shitz hotter

even tho ur rhymin ur not makin much sense, if this was an audio battle maybe u wud hav the edge since people may not hear everythin u say and it may sound better than it looks but since its text we get to read every single lyric and critisize it. wats with u and killin people bitches anyway? Dont really get it or see the punch, if there is one must be quite soft and unclear.

stinkin like a skunk ate pacino ur baisically just thoughts crammed im finished wit messin
ur worse then a drunk philipino with no god damned english lessons

hmm that was a clear punch, not true at all tho, cuz Do Ray Me was clear in his diss but ur the confusin one that needs english lessons in how to organise and structure ur thots in clear detail instead of just tryin to rhyme with little meanin and justification.

[Enimee]

im sorry if ur a fucking retard shady4life u continue to just blow me away with your idocy so here i will break down every single line so that u can understand completely...numbnutted butfuck



welp this should be easy now that your finally finished dicking around-(he took a long time to post)
i can get to rippin u apart like the back of this disk i just found-(im gonna rip him apart like i would rip the back of a cd i jus found when putting it on my computer)

cuz like a disk in ur back that gets slipped u get hit- the only straight fag that sips on the crack-(sipping on the crack of another guy..........hes gay...and fakes being straight oh and u know how peopla slip disks in there backs..jus playin off my previous line)
of another dude thats jus sick and its wack u completed the script im jus flippin it back-(still playin off previous line and addin more insult on how long it took him to finish his shyt and that im jus flippin back into my mental pages aka freestyle)

so "Will" how does it feel ur what 35-36 and gonna get votes next ta nil-(nope not sure on his age but he gets this personal cuz we had a convo on yahoo messenger oh and his real name is will)
against a kid 16 who would flex and kill like godzilla im str8 next to destilled-(jus playin off the previous line look get a dictionary if u need further explainin)

water that i drowned ur girl natalie pregnent wit ur daughter blood floatin cuz of how i dishonored-(another personal brought out his girls name and playin off last line as well)
her father so now she's weepin in the womb my words jus burned cuz my shitz hotter-(sayin that i killed the girl and kid with my lyricallity the same i used to kill there father/man aka will or doe ray me cuz my shits better aka hotter)

stinkin like a skunk ate pacino ur baisically just thoughts crammed im finished wit messin-(sayin his shyts not good dont flow well cuz its jus crammed and that im done messin around)
ur worse then a drunk philipino with no god damned english lessons-(not that he literally cant speak good english just that hes so bad its as IF he couldnt and i added the whole drunk thingy for more effect)





so there complete synopsis and please dont post on threads if u aint gonna vote



oh and also i would like to formerly tell u to go jump off a bridge or summin cuz u dont deserve to live after a review like that

[Doe Ray Me]

btw all the time, i wasn't writing it

i was busy with personal shit, so ur diss doesn't mean much

[Enimee]

lol it does if i dont know that cuz i can say whateva bro what kinda fake mc whines about my disses trying to disjustify him cuz hes obviously worried that otherwise theres a great chance hes gonna lose...






can we get some votes please

[Doe Ray Me]

lol it does if i dont know that cuz i can say whateva bro what kinda fake mc whines about my disses trying to disjustify him cuz hes obviously worried that otherwise theres a great chance hes gonna lose...






can we get some votes please

For your information you little cunt, i dont care if i win or lose, its all practice at the end of the day

jus shut the fuck up and let people vote

[IceAxe]

Flow: Enimee - DRM was off with the sometimes with choppy structure
Structure - Enimee
Multis: Tied
Rhymes Tied
Punches: Enimee- while it may or may not be true, he got more personal with it
Wordplay: DMR - better quality than Enimee imo
Vocab - tie
Other - Enimee - enjoyed it more overall

so... 7-4 Enimee

[Enimee]

thanks iceaxe for the vote keep them comin please

[meinem]

man wats wit all the hostility lol its only for fun man chill


this is hard as i wasnt impressed with either but heres my thoughts


Flow: Enimee - DRM didnt flow at all it was fucked up eminee was flowing ok even if it wasnt thatmuch sense in places

Structure - Enimee
Multis: no comment
Rhymes no comment
Punches: Enimee- eminee was more personal butt hat dont always make a good ryhme
Wordplay: no comment both had a good range
Vocab - equal

i guess going by that and there was 3 draws i have to say eminee wins my vote on a 2-0 basis

[Doe Ray Me]

ok, down by 2, thats cool