Robbo/Sinima/Flatline - Music Ish [Collab]

[robbo-7]

Im new to this audio stuff so go easy on me please. I only have a desktop mic also, so i have to make the most of what i have so please excuse the quality.
Found an open collab on Sinimas soundclick page and i liked the song so i thought i might aswel have a go .
Any feedback is appreciated, even critical because i have alot to learn

1st Verse - Flatline
2nd Verse - Sinima
3rd Verse - Me
Hook - Sinima

http://www.zshare.net/audio/480148515a5eaa/

Thanks in advance .. robbo ..