Doe Ray Me .:VS:. Enimee Part 2 [VOTE]

[shady4life!]

water that i drowned ur girl natalie pregnent wit ur daughter blood floatin cuz of how i dishonored
her father so now she's weepin in the womb my words jus burned cuz my shitz hotter

so this means that u killed his girlfriend while she was pregnent (which she is not) by drownin her and before that killed her father and now the girl that u already killed is cryin cuz u can rap better than DRM.... hmm makes a lot of sense to me

rippin u apart

u dont ripp apart cd's u just rip them its not the same if u add apart... if it werent for ur justification i wud hav thot u took the cd and tore it to peices.

the only straight fag that sips on the crack
of another dude

yeah i can tell ur tryinta hint that he is gay, but the word sip is confusin wat does he sip?
y didnt u just say: the only straight fag that shuves his dick on the crack of another dude, but sip



Flow: DRM straight forward and easy to read rhymes thar r not too far away from each other
Multis: DRM had definitely more and better
Rhymes: Eminmee had more content to judge and rhymes
Punches: DRM- Eminmee was personal but gav no real punches all fluff
Metaphores/Similes: DMR maybe he did not hav as many but they were more effective and sounded better
Vocab - Eminmee more content to judge from more and better vocab
Structure- DRM -Eminmees ideas too jumbled, and DRM had a better finish but it was still too short
Other - DRM- Eminmee was too confusin and stuggles too onfussin his ideas which r unclear, he needs to think more fore he posts raps over here.

6-2 Do Ray Me

I dont got anythin against u Eminme i just dont think ur as good as u think in rappin. Try bein more specific when u rap so we can understand u better and know exactly wat u mean...

[Enimee]

ur not supposed to you douchebag
wehen u listen to rap or any music for that matter do u know exactly what the mother fucker is talkin about ? no u form ur own ideas and relate to it as such i think ur voting is way biased u are still tryinmg to say that its not factual and facts have near to NOTHING to do with rap...half the rappers out there are liars...and its not like i was lieing about somethin that even matter i was claimin his girl was pregnent which would hit home with him cuz its his girl and if she was pregnent that wud be his kid...when i battle i ATTACK the other person im not gonna write a bunch of lines so u can say hay ur lyrics arent that great its not a fucking song u imbucile im attacking him and by doing that not everything i say has to be true

i personally dont want to count ur vote cuz its is extremly biased and u are obviously hoppin on drms dick here tlalkin about how much u know about his personal life and shyt i dont give a fuck personaly u suck worse then he does and u need to quit imediately BUT sense u are the only one to vote for him thus far i dont want to take that away from him cuz then he may bitch....so ill let it slide but from now on i would like to ask if u would PLEASe ignore me as another person on this site all together i dont exist to u u dont exist to me and leave it that way please

[shady4life!]

ur not supposed to you douchebag

all good rappers hav a real meanin behind their words punk, they just dont spit shit. If they do they just do it on purpose to make the song funny, or more strange faster, etc they do sometimes actually but the good ones do it rarely and in a freestyle battle spittin meaninless rhymes wont get u far, but huge amount of the time their words actually hav meanins and they aint just rhymin shit but for a text battle its compulsary for u to make more sense when u rapped.

i personally dont want to count ur vote cuz its is extremly biased

wrong punk.... my vote wasnt biased at all, as u said Eminmee we all hav entitled to our own opinions, i really think his battle was better than yours and made more sense. Y wud i be bias? I already said i got nuthin against u. And besides ur still winnin in votes aight no biggie. And just becuz i voted against u does not mean u hav to go in an act of revenge and vote against me on my next battles. if we all did shit like that we wud never know who is really better. Its an honest vote and my opinion whether u like it or not.

half the rappers out there are liars.

u think i dont know that son? Yes its true they do lie...but ur lie is different, ur lie is like Jarule or Benzino sayin somethin about Eminmen's 3rd daughter that he doesnt even hav. When we battle here we say all kinds of shit.....duuuuuhhhh obviously its not all true. But anyway i just cudnt grasp that line tho, and was not very clear exactly to me wat u did.

water that i drowned ur girl natalie pregnent wit ur daughter blood floatin cuz of how i dishonored
her father so now she's weepin in the womb my words jus burned cuz my shitz hotter

This line barely makes any sense.... i just cant grab it. Ur rhymin but its still so vague dont u see?
They r good rhymes but u hav a hard time puttin them together... i think thats ur main problem.

Dont mean to be a cridit but im just sayin wat i think. So dont have a heart attack, u can still win...sheesh calm down will ya take a chill pill

[Enimee]

im chill bro and dont call me son i aint the son of shit got me?
and i dont know him like that seer if i had access to more facts to base an attack off of then i would use them but what i had is what i had and thats what i did with it u dont like it? fine i sed i didnt care and i sed id use ur vote no matter how incorrect u were, im tired of bitchin wit u so can i please get more votes people

[shady4life!]

im tired of bitchin wit u

yeah im tired of you bitchin with me too

[Enimee]

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