
ARRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!! STOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!......
McMaybe u hav no shame

....pickin on a little girl and treatin her like that

, dont u know she is knew to this site? Be nice to ur guest and dont say things that will hurt anyones feelings

... And Bodacious we r just tryinta help u, u wont win many battles if ur droppin short simple soft gentle freestyles like that. U said u cud do better than me and eminmee but both of our verses wudda killed yours if u put this against it. U need more multies and more complex rhymes, and just more originality. Way too simple
ps: u can make ur lines longer, infact u shud, to increase ur chances of winnin by addin more rhymes content, punches etc.
FLOW = bodaciousent- meinem's flow was kinda slow, he cudda made it more slick if he added more rhymes and multis
VOCAB = meinem
STRUCTURE = meinem
MULTI'S = meinem
RHYMES = meinem
OTHER = meinem was very original and i liked it a lot funny too
Meinem won. Bodaciousent i think u need to change ur style a bit and take Mcmaybe's advice. But u did okay. Tho keep practicin

If u dont like the way i act then blow me, i ride with the real peeps who know me.