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NEW SONGS "4:20" and "Something About You"

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 12th, '07, 16:44

Check it out on my myspace or soundclick. Any feedback would be appreciated. This was recorded a little while ago.

http://www.myspace.com/stevespag

http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag

Steve Spag :)

Edit:

I just released another track with Spratt called "Something About You"...this is the last of my tracks with him for the Mixtape, so I'll be back with some new single shit soon.
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Re: NEW SONG "4:20"

Postby Kez » Nov 12th, '07, 18:34

Beat is quite chilled, works for the track

Spratt: Lyrics aren't too complex, but the flow is great.
Some good lines.
Not my kind of concept, but i understand it for what it is.

You: Rhymes are a bit better here, flow is still great.
Again some good lines.

Hook is alright, but the hook reminds me too much of Love You More to be honest.
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Re: NEW SONG "4:20"

Postby Vettori » Nov 12th, '07, 21:28

Hmm, Most of what Kez Said Seems about right, I dont like the concept of the song. seems like a waist of time, But it may catch other people, just not my specifics...Overall Good job, The other songs on ur page are alright styll, i thought a few of em needed some work, But you delivered Fairly decent... I definatly think you can do better tho.
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Re: NEW SONG "4:20"

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 12th, '07, 22:08

Thanks for the comments, glad you both liked the track. :)
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Re: NEW SONG "4:20"

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 13th, '07, 11:19

Normally, I don't like tracks about "the puff-puff", and this isn't an exception.

But that's just the topic I don't like, but the rap is very very good in this one. And getting on a track with Kyle Spratt probably will give you some recognition. At least on this site whatsoever. but yeah, good rap, nice flow and laid-back-track (with a minus on the topic). Beat is kinda simple though, but that's okay, since I like those kind og stripped beats.
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Re: NEW SONG "4:20"

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 15th, '07, 18:09

KillahGoat wrote:Normally, I don't like tracks about "the puff-puff", and this isn't an exception.

But that's just the topic I don't like, but the rap is very very good in this one. And getting on a track with Kyle Spratt probably will give you some recognition. At least on this site whatsoever. but yeah, good rap, nice flow and laid-back-track (with a minus on the topic). Beat is kinda simple though, but that's okay, since I like those kind og stripped beats.


Well other than not liking the topic, thanks for likin' the track, lol. And yeah, I have a lot of tracks with Spratt, me and him have been boys since grade school, lol. The beat was actually just picked by chance. I had that 16 already written and I heard that beat and it just sounded like it would match to my verse about weed sounding like a love song, lol. Kyle also had his 16 from a while before and it just happened to work on it. I liked the way it turned out, lol.
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