Bar Vs J-Roc[J-Roc Wins 3-0 ko]

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10 Lines
3-0 ko
4-1 tko
5 Votes To Win
Tie Votes Give 1 Vote Each



Ill Drop In bout 15 minutes man just making a hot chocolate

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Look i rock mics you stock tights, everyone knows it stands for jock rock right
i mock your type and knock the might you might have see you bottom of my tight graph

Leave you with a sinking form of scar your girls a alchoholic, always drinking from the bar
smell your rhymes there stinking from this far, you couldnt get a spin if you a tire from a car

i torment a condidition that present the submission to repent your position
you consent all cognittion i got you wishing my lines left missing instead im death kissing

stand under the missles toe as i thunder my missles flow
you wonder how this'll go, painful, so i plunger my thistles slow

i leave you with a last thought, what has this task taught
im tighter than you will you droppy like snot


Missles toe - mistletoe

completely lost it at the end lmao


anywae, good luck man

[J Roc]

ill SPRAY THA CLIPS TWICE at this GAY AN THIS DYKE cause what he SAYIN IS HYPE
so ill put tha Nine-to-you to split ya "Mind-in-Two" n MAKE U THINK TWICE!!(Damn!)
cuz When tha Pops-bust it'll have dis kid "Washed-up" like wen ya BREAK YA SINK PIPES!!
"Chill Out" like u SKATE ON RINK ICE cuz hes STARTIN TO WISH THIS..PARTY WAS HIS SHIT
cause he Know he da weaker-rapper so ill "Eat-Bar-Faster" then SMARTIES N KISSES!!
ill HEAT THIS DIPSHIT. Aiight Gangsta..ill leave ya "English Fucked" like he SPEAKIN BRITISH!!
Dawg, ill load my Arms-n-Shoot dat'll leave "Bar-In-Two" like im EATIN TWIX STICKS!!
You "Rushed" ya Drop?? ill leave my "Writins after that" like ya SPEEDIN TICKETS!!
Poppin-sounds? i know u stoppin-Clown cuz ill "Roll you down a hill" like i PUSHED A SLED
cause when i see ya mom...theres always "Cockin-Rounds" like i BUSTED LEAD!!(Think!)

Edit::no hate in that last line man...


G'd Luck wit it...Kinda Rushed certain parts doe

[Enimee]

FLOW -- Bar
STRUCTURE -- J
PUNCHES -- J
MULTIES -- tie
RHYMES --J
VOCAB -- Bar
COMPLEXITY -- J
NAMEPLAY -- J
PERSONALS -- J
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) -- J


damn j fuckin just wow that was sick on some realness...bar u did good if u hadnt lost it at the end it wuda been closer lol but good battle both of u J gets ma vote tho

[J Roc]

Thanks Enimee...Guess it was Better Then i Thought

[J Roc]

Uppin.........

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

shit forgot bout this lol

nice drop man, you killed me

[J Roc]

Thanks Doe^^U Did Pretty Good Wit It Too

Upped Again....

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

some people vote and finish this already

[SajN]

FLOW -- Bar
STRUCTURE -- Bar
PUNCHES -- Both were good, but I'll vote for J-Roc
MULTIES -- Tie
RHYMES --JR
VOCAB -- Bar
COMPLEXITY -- JR
NAMEPLAY -- JR
PERSONALS -- JR
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) -- Bar.

6 - 5 to JR

A nice battle, a bit close too.
J-roc got my vote. But Bar, you was also really good.

[Rain Matrix]

FLOW -- Bar
STRUCTURE -- J roc
PUNCHES --J-Roc
MULTIES -- Tie
RHYMES --Bar
VOCAB -- Tie
COMPLEXITY -- J roc
NAMEPLAY -- J roc
PERSONALS --J roc
OTHER-- Bar

J roc-- 7-5

bar was killing it at first but by tha end he was winded, j roc was sick but rhymes could have been more natural still good

[J Roc]

Chea I Agree^^Im Readin My Verse An I Coulda Done Better...

Thanks For Votin Guys, Das a 3-0 Ko...Scream@me If U Wanna Re-Match, Bar

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Thx for voting ya'll, n good battle J-Roc