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Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines] (Vote Now!)

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Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines] (Vote Now!)

Postby Enimee » Dec 10th, '07, 07:46

ite normal votes you go then i go
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Re: Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines]

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 10th, '07, 17:58

u keep talking like u've Slain Others but u'll drown in tha Rain Fucker
a Dead Stop like a Head Shot ya Brains Ruptured like ya Games Structure

enimee will cut tha Action Short he's steady Back And Forth like a See Saw
he thinks were Blind Ta That he's got tha Kind Of Rap u'd hear on Hee Haw

u were born Ta Lose get over it Ya Noob so u can tell Tha Truth or Be A Liar
spitting like a Junk Uzi ya like an old time Stunt Movie we can See Tha Wire

ya skill is As Is yur an Addict with his Last Hit enimee this Man He Fails
so Fast It's impossible to Act Sick he gets Trashed Quick like Spam Emails

drop ya diss On Me it's not like u can do it Strongly in tha End Ya Weak
yur only Options Running ya Dropping Nothing trying to make that [N-A-Me]
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Re: Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines]

Postby Enimee » Dec 11th, '07, 05:59

ahjhhhh damn i gotta get on to do this that last line killed me....mite wanna add an explanation incase shady4life wants to vote :)


check it im bout to rip your style im slick with guile known to make actors limp a mile
for tryna walk in my shoes sometimes it gets me dark and im blue but in the end ull see im sick and wild

this whole forums full of fony com-plain'as noobs and str8 up pains in R-ain-us
pissed because r-aint-us this boys no man he's more like a premature action of star-bang-a's

look you''ll see what happens when i speak the clap man its a hand in hand reaction
when u rhyme we all leave laughin like jeeze thats c-rap y man was he dressed as batman?

that aint no joke u and ur black over coat wanna be the one you need not a cape but a gun
walkin throo my neighborhood with that 4 year old shyt would leave ya broke with no hope son

thumb cut off so you cant get homeim the kinda dude who'll implant chrome in ur dome at 80 miles per hour
this fag prolly sings to shady while in the shower tellin hime that tomorrow will be there final hour cuz he's gonna pull a stan off the top of some towers



yeah yeah i did what i cud not much cud follow that drop nice shyt rain
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Re: Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines]

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 11th, '07, 10:32

holy shit, hot battle, i had to re-read like 3 times each anywae this should be close

FLOW -- Rain - it was close, but the longer lines and structure put me off when reading enimee's drop
STRUCTURE -- Rain - structure was dodgy by enimee
PUNCHES -- Rain - last 3 bars were murderous
MULTIES -- Tie - good stuff from both
RHYMES -- Enimee - i thought he had smarter rhymes
VOCAB -- Tie - nothing to big from anyone
COMPLEXITY -- Tie - very hard one to call both had a great mix of skill and complexity in it, rain last bar was killer, but so was enimee's second bar so i really cant call on this cat
NAMEPLAY -- Tie - Again murderous from both
PERSONALS -- Tie - Nothing to personel form both, each had a couple of rhymes on each other personely but nothing much and they level each other out imo
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) -- Rain - this was tough to call but the last bar on rains drop did it for me

@enimee - rains last bar was killer and i thought you were about to match it with your first bar, when i read "actors limp a mile" i felt for sure you were gonni spin a Green Mile (the film) reference in there (the green mile is Death Row For slow people) witch if you had lead to a punch would have even'd out the strength of rains last bar, unforutnetly you never, witch sorta let me down, i felt for sure it was coming

Overall 4-1 To Rain Matrix

its alot closer in reality than rain matrix having a 3 point lead in the breakdown

one of the sickiest battles in a while and i actually enjoyed reading it, sick stuff guys :y:
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Re: Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines] (Vote Now!)

Postby shady4life! » Dec 11th, '07, 19:12

FLOW -- Rain easily won his was more simple and slicker to read even tho it had a lot of multies
STRUCTURE- Rain was strong thru out and had a nice finisher
PUNCHES -- Rains punches were more densely placed and stronger. Eminmees were weaker and require more searchin to find them
MULTIES -- Rain was full of em
RHYMES -- Rain just like punches, his rhymes are placed densely
VOCAB -- Tie didnt see much
COMPLEXITY -- Eminmee
NAMEPLAY -- Eminmee
PERSONALS -- Eminmee
OTHER- Rain didnt enjoy Eminmees that much since he dissed me for no good reason again not that i really care, but rain just seemed better more dense with better content.

But from both it was a good drop

Rain 6-4
If u dont like the way i act then blow me, i ride with the real peeps who know me.
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Re: Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines] (Vote Now!)

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 12th, '07, 20:06

2-0 me...

...uppin for more votes
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Re: Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines] (Vote Now!)

Postby C-Game » Dec 14th, '07, 15:10

FLOW - E
STRUCTURE - Rain .. ( last bar again E )
PUNCHES - E
MULTIES - Tie
RHYMES - Rain
VOCAB - didnt see any complex words on both ends
COMPLEXITY - Rain
NAMEPLAY - Tie (sick stuff on both ends)
PERSONALS - didnt see any
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - E ... fuckin 9th line... lol... the shower part

oh i was so sure Rain had it
lol..
but its a tie in the end
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Re: Rain vs. Enimee [10 lines] (Vote Now!)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 11th, '08, 02:45

rain wins 3-1, voting closed due to in-activity

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