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NoN-Stop VS Bar(Bar Wins 3-0 KO)

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NoN-Stop VS Bar(Bar Wins 3-0 KO)

Postby SajN » Dec 12th, '07, 20:50

3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
Tie - One vote each.


My first battle. Cross the fingers xD

I'll drop in 10- 15 minutes... if I haven't, it possibly means that I can't before tomorrow. The time here is 9.00 PM and I have to woke up early tomorrow.
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar

Postby SajN » Dec 12th, '07, 21:16

"hey there Kid In Blue, do ya know who’s Rippin’ You?
I’m Spittin’ the Truth, I’m hungry for a Chicken Soup

a Sicken Poop and I will rip him Quick-And Smooth
he Stinks-And Use the same Lick-In every Shoe

I’mma Bar his Cheated Wins, and rip Apart his Beated Skin
I keep my Undefeated Grin, there’s your ghost, you Lost, and I Win"



Kid In Blue: Bar is blue (news-poster).


And please excuse my english.. I know there could be some mistakes.


You're next Bar.. :y:
Last edited by SajN on Dec 13th, '07, 11:51, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 12th, '07, 22:50

Judging by that you should go to school you could go the fool,
my mood though is kool, you dont phase me, Like a dead socket, you cant tase me

you think you a moderator your just moderate, why dont ya quit ?
you wont do shit like you constipated i incarcerated you, ya wack n aint rated

keep pleading for me to flop your just leading to whats not
your needing to a chop ill never finish like i'm non stop


Explination - 1st line (his sig)
3rd line (hes a mod)
6th line (his name)


nice drop for your first time man, and good luck :y:
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby lil_bayly » Dec 12th, '07, 23:09

-Edited by bar-

vote doesnt count edit in a breakdown if you wish it to be counted
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby Crazy Sycho » Dec 12th, '07, 23:53

-Edited by Bar-

vote doesnt count edit in a breakdown if you wish your vote to be counted
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 13th, '07, 00:01

^ follow the rules guys :y:
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby SajN » Dec 13th, '07, 11:32

Nice drop Bar.
Good Luck :y:


Common Guys, vote (without breaking the rules)
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby Enimee » Dec 14th, '07, 06:02

FLOW - Bar
STRUCTURE - Tie
PUNCHES - bar
MULTIES - bar
RHYMES - bar
VOCAB - bar
COMPLEXITY - tie
NAMEPLAY - tie
WORDPLAY - tie
PERSONALS - tie
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - none

guess bar gets it was real hard to vote on this one gave alot of thought
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby SajN » Dec 14th, '07, 08:08

Aight. Thanks for the vote Enimee. I guess I wasn't so bad after all.

1-0 Bar


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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby C-Game » Dec 14th, '07, 14:56

FLOW - NS
STRUCTURE - NS - bar was off a lil in the 3 and 4th
PUNCHES - bar
MULTIES - Tie ... liked both of urs ...
RHYMES - bar
VOCAB - bar
COMPLEXITY - Bar had good transitions ... (why dont ya quite... to wont do shit )
NAMEPLAY - Tie (good ones on both )
WORDPLAY - Tie
PERSONALS - Bar ( the moderate one was kooler )
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - Tie.. why??? coz NS was impressive in his first drop .. had to put it there

8-6 to bar

edit: Next tym guys post the cats on the top of the post so its easy for us to copy and paste them
i had to copy enimees post to do it....
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby SajN » Dec 14th, '07, 16:28

Thanks for the vote C-Game :y:

C-Game wrote:OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - Tie.. why??? coz NS was impressive in his first drop .. had to put it there

And thanks for that :worship:

Just wonder, what is Complexity?


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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 14th, '07, 21:59

NoN-Stop wrote:Thanks for the vote C-Game :y:

C-Game wrote:OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - Tie.. why??? coz NS was impressive in his first drop .. had to put it there

And thanks for that :worship:

Just wonder, what is Complexity?


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complexity can be taken different ways, sometimes just a mixture of rhymes, multi's, worplday ect. will get taken as complexity, other times its a added twist to the drop or a style used that give it a little something extra..well thats what i class as complexity
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby C-Game » Dec 15th, '07, 06:57

NoN-Stop wrote:Thanks for the vote C-Game :y:

C-Game wrote:OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - Tie.. why??? coz NS was impressive in his first drop .. had to put it there

And thanks for that :worship:

Just wonder, what is Complexity?


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well let just say its a summary of all in one
u can have internal rhymes used in a meta...
or even a transition that keeps on rhymin internally but changes in to a new rhyme in that line..
if u didnt understand wat i said let me know... ill do an example
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby SajN » Dec 15th, '07, 12:05

Thanks Bar and C-Game.
I understood it. Nice explaining.

Vote people.
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Re: NoN-Stop VS Bar(Vote Now)

Postby IceAxe » Dec 16th, '07, 05:33

FLOW - NS
STRUCTURE - NS
PUNCHES - Bar
MULTIES - Tie
RHYMES - Bar
VOCAB - Bar
COMPLEXITY - Tie
NAMEPLAY - Tie
WORDPLAY - Tie
PERSONALS - Bar - had quantity and quality
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - Tie

8-7 Bar, this one took a lot of thought

Non Stop, you did pretty good first time around :y: way better than I did lol
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