Blackheart VS Shady4Life(Blackheart Wins 3-0 KO)

[shady4life!]

I'll eat you up like a brown muffin, beat you around down on the ground huffin, giv this hound a ruffin, pfffttt this clown thinks im bluffin, I'll make this kid bleed with chest open, neck broken, weak chokin, blood soakin, mud loafin, gun smokin aint jokin, put this pussy on his kneez, lay his ass dead diseazed, scared tryinta appeaze, findin it hard ta breath, crazy with extacy, filled with holes like cheeze, afta one fight with mee, i'll blast thru his ass like a gattling so fast wudnt know wats happenin, i'll slaughter this Persian creatin, and watch the surgant say his blackheart aint beatin.


*EDIT*

PERSONALS - Blackheart is persian
NAMEPLAY - i played on Blackhearts name on the last line

a creetin (cretin) is a lazy stupid person. Loafin means like to idle waste time doin nuthin, kinda wat a pig might do in mud and a metaphore of wat wud happen to blackheart physically and lyrically when im thru with him *mud loafin

[Enimee]

FLOW -B
STRUCTURE- B
PUNCHES - Shady
MULTIES - B
RHYMES - Shady
VOCAB - B
COMPLEXITY - B
NAMEPLAY - Shady
WORDPLAY - Shady
PERSONALS - Shady
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - B
5-6 blackheart


zero hate i voted like i did before cuz i thought it was too close for a cat break down and i knew that the catz woulit went BUT since someone complained this is what happens...i no way shape or form do i think shady deserved a loss here but since blackhearts was more....ummm....together and pinpoint he gets it from the cat breakdown...dont blame me i jus state facts with hate lack

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Enimee will put his vote into a breakdown


deleted shady4lyfes post to stop any sort of argument starting

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FLOW - shady4life - simplies multis lead to eaisier flow
STRUCTURE - blackheart - perfect, and i hate people who runs lines together like shady4 lyfe did
PUNCHES - Shady4life - his last punch was really nice
MULTIES - Blackheart - shady4life proba had more but blackhearts were better quality imo
RHYMES - Blackheart - nice rhyming
VOCAB - Blackheart - nice vocab
COMPLEXITY - Shady4life - both used a mixture of rhymes and multis but shady4life used nameplay witch edges him in this cat
NAMEPLAY - Shady4life - he atleast used some
WORDPLAY - Blackheart - nothing from shady4life caught my eye, as in i seen 1 or 2 from blackheart i liked
PERSONALS - Shady4life - blakchearts drop could have been aimed at anyone
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - Blackheart, i enjoyed him flowing his rhymes and his multis were nice, but mostly he got a real nice rhyme structure witch adds to the rhymes flow something i hold of high regard

6-5 To Blackheart, very close, nice battle guys

[shady4life!]

thanx for the honest vote Bar, and by the way i ran my lines to show that it was a fast flow, when u skip sometimes it makes the reader think that ur meant to rest or pause each space but its meant to be said smoothly as if it was all one sentence. More votes plzzz

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uppin for votes

[SajN]

FLOW -- Shady
STRUCTURE -- Blackheart
PUNCHES - Shady
MULTIES - BH
RHYMES - Tie
VOCAB - BH
COMPLEXITY - BH
NAMEPLAY - Shady
WORDPLAY - BH
PERSONALS - Shady
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) - BH

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3-0 KO to Blackheart

Closed