Voices 1.5

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i alreayd told ya what i thought and been listening to this for a while now lol but ill feed properly to show these mo'fo's how its done


awesome track TMW is ruler of all lol nah seriously

The Beats Sick, cant say nothing else bout it lol whoever produced it props to them lol


At the start it takes a bit to get into the consistent flow after you say "intuition" (Sp?) its flows great before that its just a little bit off, nothing to serious though, The chorus has a sick flow and i really like the lyrics in it The second verse is my favourite i love the lyrics and the flow is great and consistent through-out it, the mathers and spiderman lines are good highlights but generaly the lyrics are really good in it, the third verse sounds as if you about to fall off (at the start) but you dont and it goes on to be sick, the lyrics again are really good and the flow is great on it

The concept, obv. you have done it before, but you somehow keep it imaginative and not boring, witch is a risk you took when doing the 1.5 it payed off imo though, the content is a good mixture of humor and sickening lines.

mixing is fine imo, and the overlays were used really well.

overall, sick track and like i said since you sent me it i had it on my tracklists reguarly so its got re-play value.

keep it up man and cant wait for the tape

[Kez]

Right, my attempt at in-depth feed

Nice beat here, i like. First thing i notice is that you're a tad lower than you should be volume-wise. At times it's a bit hard to hear, needs turning up just a tad from what i hear. Great flow though, and lyrics pretty decent. I like how you kind-of tell a story in the second verse. You got some good lines too, some funny. Delivery is decent, could sound a bit more lively at times, cause in the hook it's more profound than the verses, although this might be because of the overlaying on the hook. Speaking of which, the hook is pretty catchy. The concept seems a bit over-exaggerated at times, but that's alright because of the kind of track it is. Mixing is fine by Mart, never slips or sounds weird.

Overall: Good track, probably 8.5-9/10

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full track review:
beat is allright...nuttin special...the chor-singin annoys after a while..
lyrics and pronouncation are decent....really good and hook is best part in the track
*still cant stand british accent* *runs* lol
mart mixed is pretty well....
maybe wut kez said about volume....could be a bit louder

@bar....hope i did some more proper feed.... haha

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*still cant stand british accent* *runs* lol

English accent

get a welsh guy, irish guy, scotish guy, and english guy, and trust me they all sound 100% different

you cant possible hate them all or else you just hating on it coz we kicked the germans ass in war lol


and yeh you gave more in depth feed dis time lol

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i dont care how many times ya kicked us in war(s) *not proud*
btu oh well i slowly get used to it....not my fav accent(s)..but its listen-able...sway,respek BA etc changed my mind

sry fo kinda interrupt ur thread killa...

[B.A.D.]

can u do a zshare or sendspace

cuz myspace still won't work on me

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can u do a zshare or sendspace

cuz myspace still won't work on me

http://www.zshare.net/audio/57585608c70722/

[Mc Cubz]

the song rite wel il start on the -ve cos i dont wana end on it
killa i rekon u need a lil more bite on ur voice like more convivtion its like ur half whispering it if you get me, we all get this problem i was alot worse than this even 6months ago so it can b worked on and i think u are slowly improving on it but u should concentrate on this cos the lyrics are fine.

the flow was moslty ok id say there were certain prases that would sound alot better if u rapped them differently but thts not as important as the first thing

as for the track the track was good the lyrics were astonishingly good it was like a death metal kind of feel with the 'losing it to evil' mindset, but also just the jouner the song took and the topics and the way you wrote the song was really good!

beat was suitable for the song!

safe killa another impressive track, work on dat first thing tho man its really holding u back from wht ur really capable of!

[B.A.D.]

2 times listened (added to mp3)

ok, the beat is great, fits the whole concept of the track.
the mixing is kinda diferent of what I am used of, still I may be wrong cuz I think this is the first time I listen to ya, its a lil hard for me to understand but thats my fault cuz I'm not used, but the lyrics that I can handle and the concept is nice, and really my style, the voice sometimes is loud, sometimes is low, I'm not sure, but its still good cuz you can listen perfect througout the whole track, except the hook cuz that went lower, also on the hook, its great and the idea is good, the flow is nice but still doesn't matches 100% the beat, the outro is amazing, loved the effect on that, the delivery is excelent you felt the power on the beat, thats good thing, I enjoyed this track, nice work you did there. just in little parts your flow was too rushed, and the mixing like I said before its a little strange, I mean its good but not perfect, maybe you could play a little more with it and see what happens.

good job mate

[randomghost]

hot beat....flow is ok..nice lyrics.... but the problems is the vocal sound lil low certain times in the song...the mixing is not that good...but still u can work on it...nice song though