It's ironic but again it's Sonik

[AspirinE]

its my first one yes, i cant really free style well, i gotta write em down, which i can do in 5-10 minutes, so i am glad i discovered this site, but i cant really do that well going FIRST against someone i do not know. i can go second , just not first

not bad for ya first

just keep practicing

[topdawgizalaw]

well since he aint responding can somebody else battle me in a different thread, and since i dont know much about any of yall , like go first lol.



o and also, tell me what u think about my raps in creative writing. thanks

[SoniK]

YO im here mutha fuker

erick i din even bother reading it
man you still breathin
shit i thought u wer leaving
i hope u fuckin beleivin
in jesus, or whatever u respect
expect to get finished
and chopped and screwed
like my name was mike jones
i'll eat ya to yr bones
and spit em out on the plate
sayin im dun, the next mc redy to get slayed
im dissin u with my eyes closed
im typin with my toes
you're so gay, and i knows
you're just another hoe
all this time u bin tlkin about shit
askin for racist Eminem tunes and where to download it
ur a faggot erick, i thought i told u dont fuk wit me
try ur luck wit me
i got a bright future, ur future ent even existent
and heterosexuals dont lyk u, its lyk u resistant
and when they lay down the coffin, i'll start CAUGHIN
tryna hide my laughing behind ur family sobbin
and the last thing i'll do is spit on ya grave
erri tym i see Erick, i spit on ya name
and ur kids askin me, why u spit on my dad
i be lyk kids go get suthin ur old man never had
that bein a life, a wife, a pay cheque, a pension
no tension over here, i just finished this easy
next tym u wna cum up, i BOOM CLAP u lyk Young Jeezy
fer sheezy and dats sum slang for my USA peoples
recognise we equal, but ur a "fraction" and im over you
now the sequel to this battle will come out
and i'll finish that too, coz i'm evil
i cud do good, but fuk it i'm too lethal


fuk u erick, cum at me again

[Erick]

Mmhh...A unexpected lesson taught here,
'heterosexuals dont like me', what do I hear ?!
Of course you should know, your queer,
which in darkrooms always get a cheer !

But here in Holland that would be oke,
we don't care, it's hell, better move here to stay.
Here you can be a male bitch that will obey,
Here you can be a free and happy gay !

(whispering)
Isn't that what you've always wished for when you pray ?

But enough on the gay jokes, bloke,
I see you have your eyes closed, because of my choke ?!!
Or did you again had too much of that cheap coke,
because like usual the bum you are is broke ?!

Maybe that's why you didn't see,
that towards you I have no sympathie,
like I usual don't have for a wannabe MC !
But that's just me and my theorie...

You're talkin' about 'Jeesy fer Sheezy' like you're all that,
all I feel when you talk is moist and getting all wet,
only your actual spit will be my threat
and because your filthy may become my death !

A problem is my missin' knowledge of your slang
and ofcourse I always left the curch before they sang
but I couldn't care less, so from da neck you'll hang,
I'll tear you up always leaving with a bang !

And if the last thing you'll do is spit on my grave,
I'm like a god so you'll be for ever my punished slave !
Like being at a sold-out MC-Wannabe destroy rave !
I'll be waiting for you and show you why you'd better have behaved !

[Coccoa]

Seriously erick, stop fronting. Its obvious Sonik killed u.

[Erick]

Oke...

[SoniK]

man i dont even need to rap, u defeat urself
and ur gettin moist and wet over me, watch urself
talking that i'm gay, and then admitting u got a pussy
i bet if i was one deep, u wudnt even push me
cuz u ent no soldier, man u an internet poet
every one here seems to know it
go battle sumwer in ur own lil language
why fuck with my anguish
man i write faster than a vanquish
and u copy and paste, and i squash u lyk a sandwish
and u got ur lettuce fucked with, cuz u a faggot Erick
u deserve no merit
get ur white sheet and wear it
muther fuker, wat it is now? lyk 10 nil to me
yet u still got the nerve to step to me
writin in verses, and puttin effort as if i give a fuck
u cud never beat me, but u can always try ur luck
u got a gamblin problem, u keep losin but u trying
and insyd ur lyrical spirit is dyin
lyk u ever had a spirit, who you frontin on man?
go fuk wun of em aids infested bitch from amsterdam
but stay outta here, cuz u continue to be hated
except by a few fuckin faggots, but ther sexuality is debated
and ur a fukin joke, and u cudn put ur hands on me
i'm so hot, you need put a fan on me
now think of a new insult, that dont involve my mum or gays
lets see if u got sumthin new to say
is it jus me, or u jus changin old rhymes
it's lyk old times
the first time i battled you, and hurt your feelings
u lower than maggot, and i'm higher than the ceiling
you's a bungalow boy, you only got ONE STORY
as for me, i'm a ghetto block that's got all the GLORY!!!!!!!

ne mor?

[Erick]

And again this bothering faggot thing,
enough of it, please also change the way you sing !
Or i'll hit ya and mark you with my bling,
cause you ain't funny, you ain't no Chandler Bing !

If all this was on paper I threw it in the bin,
Although you always seem to think that you can win,
while you're weakness should be considered a sin !
Thank god there's but one and you're not a twin !

You're story is lame and thin,
like mine at work after drinking too much Gin.
With russian roulette I always take another spin,
no fear whatsoever that's my only sin !

It's got nothing to do with nerve,
I only think you should get what you deserve,
a bitter sweet symphony like 'The verve',
cause where the hell did you get your nerve ?!

And so you know, untill I win I'll slice and dice
put some pepper on it cause I like the spice,
Surprise ! Not the girls ! I thought we were amongst guys ?!
You lame assed ghetto thug, jurkin' like there is a prize...

[Erick]

I'm sorry but you are just the best...You win as usual, but you allready knew this somehow...

[Coccoa]

Erick why you think Sonik defeated you?
Why you think i won over V-Dog?
Why you think i won over So Real?

Because you three are the same. Y'all get many negative opinions from Trshady.com forumers, for different reason eachother. It aint about who's tha best, or who's tha lyricist. It's about keeping it real.

When you want to attack sumone, be 100% sure you'll achieve victory. If not, lay low and take it like a man.

[Erick]

F*** you !

[AspirinE]

F*** you !

u know u lose all the timeand that "Beat me ..coz i like it" atitude is WACK

Y dont u justy go write some more lyrical shit and come back and drop

12 outstanding bars rather than 123904304 of that wack stuff

[Coccoa]

Uhhh...ok. Well i hope i helped ya

[Erick]

12 outstanding bars rather than 123904304 of that wack stuff

What exactly do you mean by this ? That it is all too long what I post ?

[AspirinE]

12 outstanding bars rather than 123904304 of that wack stuff

What exactly do you mean by this ? That it is all too long what I post ?

U know exactly wat i mean/
just flee the scene/
coz losing is u daily routine/


thats the type of shit that aint worth responding to
and ur rhymes are pretty much similar