Learn To Love Me-DelinQuent

[DelinQuent]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=6212938

my first time rapping fast. 3rd verse was written and recorded today. gimme feedback! lol
Note-Lines about ghostriding may sound like a diss but it's not, i promise lol. if you're mad, then fuck you lol

Lyrics:whats the difference? there ain't nothin different/
i guess what it is, is i'm back on my shit again/
look this way i need your attention man/
call the news and get the cameraman/
rhymin circles my raps doin handstands/
know my name, it's de-lin-quent/
you know my game when ya see me spit/
and if you're deaf then read this lips/
never will it come when dq quits/
don't start beef you don't want that kid/
when i flow so crazy it's marvelous/
altho i go soft i'm the hardest yes/
spit love songs, i relate to it best/
spit a beef track, i aim thru ya chest/
and when that shits over, there ain't too much left/
no gas in ya tank and that's the difference/
gotta sick flow, i'm untouchable/
no spittin slow let you dumfucks know/
ninja on the track these my numchucks yooo/
relax kick it back this is not an attack/
so amazed that the white boy ain;t wack/
spit sick as a disease on the track/
with so much wit i dont need to be black/
call me raps joker i'm theivin cultureeee/

(hook) you gon have to learn to love me/
i'm gon always turn it up see/
you ain't never gonna stop me/
you gon have to learn to love me/
such a witty mother fucka/
i'm gon take it to anotha/
level for you fuckin cowards/
you gon have to learn to love me

regaurdless of how, mother fuckin ugly/
you think that i, motherfuckin might be/
wanna spit game then motherfucka fight me/
catch me in my nikes i'm quick as lightening/
catch me in my white tee.. uhh bite me!/
fact is at the top i'll remain/
and i'm not at the top of my game/
mature enough to know that everyday/
if i sit down and work i'll find a new way/
to entertain and redefine the game/
so much to gain, with no a minute lost/
this is the start i'm just kickin off/
if you a hata then bitch get gone/
suck a dick slow cause you're jerkin me wrong/
love me then we can work on a song/
got you pheenin like the first of the month/
spit my words till they burnin ya tongue/
cough up blood like a coal miner's lung/
this is how i'ma make you fall in love/
same way that lesbians love rug/
put you sleep like a date rape drug/
then play my tape straight to ya ear drum/
side effects make ya wake up dumb/
only thing that matters is it's me you love/

(Hook)

how could you not see i'm easily the best/
flows so hot yes hotter than the rest/
cream of the crop you at the bottom near death/
i'm not hatin i'm just sayin/
i'm on the real and you need to stop playin/
every track you spit seems to get lamer/
big whip big money, yes you a player/
but i am the shit and i'm callin you a faker/
yes you're stupid, lame in the head/
say you resurrect but the game ain't dead/
no intellect, "but you steady gettin bread"/
just quit rap shit go to college/
but you can cause you got such a fat wallet/
dawg i'm jealous coiuld you tell us again/
i'ma memorize your line and spit em to my friends/
lines so hot about your mercedes benz/
let me hear some lyrics while your ghostriding/
then i might just be impressed/
cause if i spit like that i would be depressed/
this is just a song with no offense meant/
you sound like soulja boy on that stupid ass shit/
oh my my i'm so nastayy/
fuck all of you, how about that?/
i'm not mad i just support real rap/

[B.A.D.]

whoa hot track

the best thing is the hook

third verse does sound like a diss haha, but if you say its not, then its not

the flow is tight also maybe at some parts u rushed it

the rhymes are excelent

the beat is a nice idea hahahaha, but the best was the hook

hot hot track

[DelinQuent]

good lookin out ax. yeah i like the hook.

again 3rd verse is NOT a diss lol

[DelinQuent]

nobody else wants to leave feed?

[Xray]

first of all you kept at same pace and same flow throughout the whole song which is fucken aweseom lyrics are dope flow is excellent beat is outragous and chorus is straight fire man..this has to be your best track up to date...and thing that pisses me off about this site is ppl hardly feed songs these days i mean only a few ppl feed tracks even if its awesome not much ppl seem to care as they used to and back to subject nice song man

[DelinQuent]

good lookin out sajjad.
just wanted to tell you, that verse you spit on "Last Night" for Ax-D was fucking incredible lol

[Xray]

good lookin out sajjad.
just wanted to tell you, that verse you spit on "Last Night" for Ax-D was fucking incredible lol

haha thanks man

[DelinQuent]

no feed? thanks.

[C-Game]

zshare or some downloadable link pls......

[DelinQuent]

if you go to the link there's a download link to the right of play hi-fi and lo-fi

[C-Game]

i cliked.. and it asks for some registration...

and it didnt stream .. was actin gay...

its ok man.. np

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

didnt like the track... hook was pretty good...catchy idea with the high voice at the end
but meh..wasnt feeling it sorry

[DelinQuent]

no need to be sorry lol. it's not for everyone. just trying out new styles and shit. thanks for listening, i appreciate the honest feed