C To Da P vs J Roc

[ctodap]

4 Lines
First To 3 Wins

Ill Spit First

[ctodap]

j roc is tha guy whos tinks hes big and bad
hes so homo that he has sex with his own dad//
iimma fuk you up like jamie lynn spears
i aint britney, buh i AM your worst nightmare//

mine sucked but oh well

your turn

[J Roc]

Ya BEST IS ALL LAME While All My Writtins Is "Dope" Like What Im TEXTIN IS SLANG !!
SEVINS AH BANG When Heat-Bust. It'll Throw "C-Up" Like Im REPPIN A GANG !!
BITCH PLEASE ! I GRIP THREES Dat'll Make U "Jump" Like FRIZZ-BE !!
It'll HIT C When Da Bullet-Goes Ya "Full-Of-Holes" Like SWIZZ CHEESE !!

Juss Seen This Was Posted .... G'd Luck ...

[ctodap]

you too

first to three wins

[Makaveli525]

Aight... I aint completely familiar about how voting goes on here... but Ima just say it like this...

C to da P just got massacred by J Roc...
Vote = J Roc

[Tash8]

i'll say this, I enjoyed ctodp more just cuz of the fact that's readable...

j-roc ur complexity ruins it...


ur one bar is like 20 syllables, which i've never never seen done in audio.. so your flow is like impossible to follow, u have internal multis that take away from ur main rhymes so it's like

blah blah, joe joe, blah blah

when we get to joe joe we're expecting a rhyme wth blah blah, we dont get it, then we get to second blah balh and we're expecting a rhyme with joe joe bu tinstead we get a rhyme with blah balh.. make it sounds really awkward and weird..

and all ur capitalizing and ur quoting is also real real annoying...


i'm not voting on this battle but those are some pointers for ur next, but if i were to vote here is what it would be

Flow - ctodap
Structure - ctodap
rhymes - j-roc
other - j-roc
enjoyment - ctodap

[ichunez]

C TO DA P KILLS JROC

[ichunez]

guessin its 2-1 for ctodap now...

[J Roc]

Lol Nah^ ..... Break It Down ....

An Tash .... Aint Gonna Argue With Ya Hate Man

"Im Not Votin On This Battle"

So 0-0? .... Lol Break It Down Guys

[IceAxe]

Flow: ctodap - J roc's lines were long as hell
Structure: ctodap
Multis: J roc
Rhymes: J roc
Punches: ehh... J roc
Nameplay: J roc
Vocab: Tie
Other: tie

4-6 J roc

Also, maybe I'm not one to talk, but J roc your style's predictable and it's gettin stale imo.

MULTI -------[filler]------ "set up for metaphor" END MULTI
MULTI "in multi" -------[filler]------ "in multi" END MULTI


Also, you shouldn't have to point out your rhymes in text, they should stand out to the reader with out having to point them out.

[Tash8]

An Tash .... Aint Gonna Argue With Ya Hate Man

my hate?

first of all, i didn't even vote...

second, don't take my critiscm, but only reason ur winning battles is because ur shit looks complicated...

[Xray]

j-roc killed c to da P and i aint gonna break down shit unless its a good good competitive battle which this aint so count it or leave it

[J Roc]

An Tash .... Aint Gonna Argue With Ya Hate Man

my hate?

first of all, i didn't even vote...

second, don't take my critiscm, but only reason ur winning battles is because ur shit looks complicated...

I Know U Aint Vote .... So Was Tha Point Of Even Postin? ... To Sway Votes .... Yah Know I Never Tryed Here .... An Your Sayin I Lost Cause Of Flow? ... Ignorin Wordplay, Nameplay, Meta's, Multies An Punches? .... C'Mon Then U Split "Enjoyment" An "Other" Into 2 Cats? ... Then Say He Got It .... Pshh! ... I Seen U Post Hatin Onna Battle Before ... That I Did Try On .... So Why Aint U "Critiscize" Then?? ... So I Can Improve .... Lol But Nah U Give Me Pointers Onna Battle ..... I Barely Put Effort Into? .... Lol Makes Sence But Chea Its Cool .... I Aint Bothered ... Hatin Is a Form Of Jelousy

An Second? .... Sorry To Burst Your Bubble ... But Im More Lyrical Then U .... I Dun Wanna Break It Down ..... But U Wanna See? ... Theres a Call Out Section ..... That Simple .... An I Wanna See U Give Me "Pointers" ..... When I KO U ...

An Lol@ Sayin My Complexity "Ruined It" ... Then Sayin I Wasent Complex ... ... Haha

An Iono, CToDaP Can Decide If We'll Count Non-Explanation Votes .....

[ichunez]

thats soft

"break it down?"

why u scared to losE?

[J Roc]

Lol Seems Like U Dickrydin CToDaP

Haha Im Not Acceptin tha Unexplained Votes .... Cause U Dont Know What Theyre Votin On .... Or If Theyre Dickrydin/Hatin ... Not Sayin Anybody Is .... But Its Better If They Explained Shit

And Scared? .... Of What? ... 2 Unexplained Votes Are For Me ... Ones Against Me .... I'd Be Closer To Winnin If I Accepted Them .... But Its Up To C If Theyre Accepted ...

So Get Ya Facts Straight Kid ...