NEW "Under My Skin" - Vettori

[Vettori]

Glad you liked the song, and naw..I dont do personals Unless im really provoked :P Thx for the feed man

[Xray]

aite cool and no worries man

[DelinQuent]

typing as i listen

1st verse, wow, amazing. i love the concept of this song. lyrics and flow are amazing

chorus was hott as well

2nd verse, also, same shit, great lyrics, great flow.

3rd verse, i didn't feel this one as much as the others. i like the end of the it tho, the singing part was good.

overall, loved the song, i personally wasn't a fan of the beat at first but the way you overtook it made me ingore the beat the whole way. great song 9/10

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lyrics are fire....message is clear (thanks to quality) lol....
hmm i liked it overall...got nuttin to complain again....singin at the end works again
hook is crack good job
beat is such a thing...for hook it works perfect...but for ur verses it could be a lil bit darker type of beat

[Kez]

You do sound a bit like Eminem, but i don't neccessarily see that as a bad thing.

Beat: It's alright but i don't love it
Lyrics in the verses, clever as fuck, lol at the Stan reference
Hook, i like it
Concept is nice
Flow's good

I'm not much good at breaking feed down, but i like this track a lot
Going on my MP3
9/10

[Jay-19]

Great track man! You said the beginning was a bit weak, but I think it's really good, as is the whole track! I love the end of verse 3 with that singing-rap part. Your flow is awesome, and the whole concept of the song is dope as hell. Your voice fits perfect to this beat. I really can't find anything to "complain" about. Except like McMaybe said, I don't like the beat that much, but it doesn't matter when you're doing such a good job on it. So big props on this track!

[Vettori]

Thanks alot, Im grateful for this type of feedback. Now i cant wait to do another song haha.....Tooo everyone who left feed, Thanks alot..Ill try to feed some more peoples songs arnd here

[NefariousPMT]

I just have to say yo, Vettori dont use a butterknife to scoop in no jar. I make his sandwiches and cut off his crusts...lucky fuck Sick track man even tho i've known about it for a while still sounds better recorded!!!!!! I WANT TO RECORD! and i will soon!

[Vettori]

Lol ye...Thanks for the Feed everyone

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

thought i alreayd left feed lol


I love this concept, i was actually going to do it a while ago but i just didnt have the skill to pull it off and decided that the response from a UK guy doing it would get overlooked lol

anywae, flow is sick, lyrics are great and the message is delivered great, weird thing to say here, but one of eminems best thing is how he does his concepts, and you did this concept amazingly, the concept is good but it is treading very thin lines but you did it right lol


if this had more publicity im sure youd hit kyle spratt level publicity, not for dissing but for the concept and how its done, infact someone should post it in rapbasements news, and in a week youll have some Sites asking for interviews lol


anywae sick stuff man , keep it up

[Vettori]

Thanks alot man, This post makes up for the one u first missed haha :P sall good thanks man i appreciate it

[Blind]

Yeah... U chose an original subjuct of song. Got me feelin a bit of humour in the lyrics so it's good. I got the same shit you got, I often sound like Eminem (like people say), and it's not because we're white, no, it's because we've grown on Em's songs. And for the last time, I try sound different from what I used to. U know, if you want succes you have to be different from others rappers. Man... Even your beat of Em's style. Overall song worth listening, that means I liked it

[SajN]

Typing while I'm listening.

Nice beat. Like it

You got a sick flow, the verses were great.. I really liked the last verse, and the part in third verse where you shifted flow or something ..
I like your delivery and the message, from what I could understand.. Can I see the lyrics ? lol

Sick stuff man Going to my Mp3

[Vettori]

Thx for the feed , Ill drop the lyrics another day

[Hadez]

i liked it. like 30 said the message is great.
flow is on point, lyrics top-notch. i liked how you didn't stray off the point you were getting across.
the part where you started kinda singin in the end was a nice touch.

as far as things for you to improve for future tracks, can't really say cuz i've never recorded anything myself , so it'd be out of place for me to critique on something i haven't experienced myself.

anyway, its a dope track. i enjoyed it very much.