NEW TRACK "WE AINT GOIN NO WHERE" STICCY Z FEAT LIL BLIZ

[<Stiiccy>]

yup brand spankin new track
from sticcy z and lil bliz
peep it out yall and leave feed

http://www.zshare.net/audio/8749782cdc06a8/

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verse 1, flow is ok, simple beat but, lyrics are really simple, delivery is boring, nothing ear catching

chorus ? uhm...bad, bad mixing not a good idea repetitive and boring

verse 2, sounds as if the person is crying...and lol lyrical ? very weak lyrics, flow is near non existent but the simple staying on beat is atleast something, delivery was terrible

verse 3, flow again very simple and repetitive, lyrics are simple once again, delivery is a bit better, variation in voice doesnt work, nothing great

outro - terrible

overall - track aint great, lyrics are really simple both guys got to work on that, flow needs to be switched up a bit, delivery wasnt great and that could be worked on, concept needs work, the guy on verses 1 + 3 got a simple flow so he should work on lyrics and getting the flow more exciting or well just more intresting, guy on verse 2 needs to work on delivery ALOT and also needs better quality and needs alot of work on flow

got potential but needs work, keep at it

[mctworm]

not really good. Beat sux and lyrics suck! 2/10!

[<Stiiccy>]

not really good. Beat sux and lyrics suck! 2/10!

cmon thats a lil harsh dont ya think?
i mean fuck that shit sounded good when i did it...

[mctworm]

not really good. Beat sux and lyrics suck! 2/10!

cmon thats a lil harsh dont ya think?
i mean fuck that shit sounded good when i did it...

no not really. i never said i wasnt mean! Yah, its harsh. Boo-fucken-who! It's the end od tha world. Get used to it!

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chill the fuck out, if you aint gonni be contructive then fuck off coz you aint wanted here and will be banned

[<Stiiccy>]

not really good. Beat sux and lyrics suck! 2/10!

cmon thats a lil harsh dont ya think?
i mean fuck that shit sounded good when i did it...

no not really. i never said i wasnt mean! Yah, its harsh. Boo-fucken-who! It's the end od tha world. Get used to it!

lol well go fuckin make your own damn song and lay off of other peoples if your just gonna make unfair stupid ass posts

[mctworm]

chill the fuck out, if you aint gonni be contructive then fuck off coz you aint wanted here and will be banned

why dont u fuck off, ban me pussy, you can go suck a wet cock, u aint wanted here either beeyatch!

[mctworm]

cmon thats a lil harsh dont ya think?
i mean fuck that shit sounded good when i did it...[/quote]
no not really. i never said i wasnt mean! Yah, its harsh. Boo-fucken-who! It's the end od tha world. Get used to it! [/quote]
lol well go fuckin make your own damn song and lay off of other peoples if your just gonna make unfair stupid ass posts[/quote]
i'm just saying my opinion, ur taking shit to seriously!

[Xray]

your lyrics were basic but the flow was better than before this time
you had some problems like too much bass in the acas and chorus was too loud
and the other guy's quality was too much reverbed other than that keep it up

7/10 cause u improved your flow

[<Stiiccy>]

chill the fuck out, if you aint gonni be contructive then fuck off coz you aint wanted here and will be banned

why dont u fuck off, ban me pussy, you can go suck a wet cock, u aint wanted here either beeyatch!

damn your gonna get banned asshole, if you don't like it, then say how he can make it better

I liked it man, alot better then the first track u put on here

thanks bro im really workin my ass off on this rap shit

[DelinQuent]

this is way better. you're definately improving. delivery was also better. lyrics are simple, but i actually tend to like simple lyrics as long as they're not ringtone raps. chorus needs a lot of work. the 2nd verse was HORRIBLE. you need to work of the voice you rap with, you sound like youre trying too hard. just be natural. you're doing well. keep at it.

[<Stiiccy>]

this is way better. you're definately improving. delivery was also better. lyrics are simple, but i actually tend to like simple lyrics as long as they're not ringtone raps. chorus needs a lot of work. the 2nd verse was HORRIBLE. you need to work of the voice you rap with, you sound like youre trying too hard. just be natural. you're doing well. keep at it.

yeah im tellin my boy to re-do his part

[Cwayon_Murder]

Err I just saw this so I thought I'd feed it.

Overall I thought it was decent. I really liked the beat, to be honest
The first verse has pretty simple lyrics, not too bad though. The flow is much better than the first track I heard from you.
The chorus the first time around was just boring because of the repeated phrase.
The second verse was bad...mic quality sucked and the guys voice sounded all whiny and shit...lyrics weren't too good either.
The chorus the second time around sounded offbeat
i liked the third verse the best, but your voice sounds weird in it lol
Overall I give it a 7/10 not counting the second verse. Just felt I should rate your part and not let the other guy bring you down in this case.

Err sorry about reviving this somewhat dead topic...like I said the beat really caught my ear

[<Stiiccy>]

Err I just saw this so I thought I'd feed it.

Overall I thought it was decent. I really liked the beat, to be honest
The first verse has pretty simple lyrics, not too bad though. The flow is much better than the first track I heard from you.
The chorus the first time around was just boring because of the repeated phrase.
The second verse was bad...mic quality sucked and the guys voice sounded all whiny and shit...lyrics weren't too good either.
The chorus the second time around sounded offbeat
i liked the third verse the best, but your voice sounds weird in it lol
Overall I give it a 7/10 not counting the second verse. Just felt I should rate your part and not let the other guy bring you down in this case.

Err sorry about reviving this somewhat dead topic...like I said the beat really caught my ear

thanks for the feed homie
and yeah we re-did the 2nd verse and lowerd the volume on the hook and put a lil few more effects in it
if you want to hear the revised version go to my myspace http://www.myspace.com/sticcycickstudios313