[New] Bar - Permit Our Sin(Produced By Mart85)

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Bar - Permit Our Sin(Produced By Mart85)
http://www.myspace.com/barthewar

first track on the myspace.

props to mart85 on the sick beat and mixing

lyrics can be found - http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=43635


feedbakc is apreciated

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like i said b4
some pretty dope rhymes...flow was solid
no complains....just didnt understand couple words...maybe its my lack of english or ur pronouncation
but overall good track man and good beat aswell

[Speech]

was diggin tha energy on this one...same as chris said some words were hard to understand...guess thatz not a language lack thing...but the shit i understood...hmm not lyrical as fuck but man thatz not shit you can throw on a track like that so you did perfect....liked the first part more..words were clearer rapped....hmm chorus was catchy, and would be even catchier if it wasn mixed a lil weird...idk if its cuz i listened to it on myspace but somehow the chorus sounded not so good as your last choruses mixed by mart...beat was sick..i think thatz a whole nother thing i heard from mart...other beats had all that energy in em...maybe i have to check out your soundclick again to correct my statement...nice shit i liked it...at bar's standards fo sheezy...what to do better hmm...can't tell right now sorry

9 / 10 nice job

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like i said b4
some pretty dope rhymes...flow was solid
no complains....just didnt understand couple words...maybe its my lack of english or ur pronouncation
but overall good track man and good beat aswell

thanks man apreciate the feed

was diggin tha energy on this one...same as chris said some words were hard to understand...guess thatz not a language lack thing...but the shit i understood...hmm not lyrical as fuck but man thatz not shit you can throw on a track like that so you did perfect....liked the first part more..words were clearer rapped....hmm chorus was catchy, and would be even catchier if it wasn mixed a lil weird...idk if its cuz i listened to it on myspace but somehow the chorus sounded not so good as your last choruses mixed by mart...beat was sick..i think thatz a whole nother thing i heard from mart...other beats had all that energy in em...maybe i have to check out your soundclick again to correct my statement...nice shit i liked it...at bar's standards fo sheezy...what to do better hmm...can't tell right now sorry

9 / 10 nice job

thanx man, apreciate the feed onyl thing i would say is i tried to balance the lyrical stuff in this track, i think there's a good amount of multi's and stuff in it, i did try to make them less obvious though so that they didnt sound chopped up and non flowing, also my raw recording wasnt at the quality is was when i worked with mart before, coz i aint got a pop filter no more so i got to stand further back to avoid major pops witch means more interfearence in the recording. lol

props again

[Kez]

Lovin the beat
Mart85 as usual !

First i'm glad to finally see a full, nice quality song from you. Been a while.
One of the best i've heard from you in a while
Lyrics are great, the concept is nice
Your quality is nice, which is a welcome change to your past low quality previews
You got some great multis n rhymes here, and the flow is hot
The chorus sums up the track perfect

Great stuff, best i've heard from you since Pride

[SajN]

DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!!

THIS WAS A DOPE TRACK!

Good lyrics, and the best I've personally heard from you
You got great rhymes
I loved the third verse

The chorus was fire!
Good work

Dmn, I really like this track

The beat is also damn good Nice work on it Mart

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Lovin the beat
Mart85 as usual !

First i'm glad to finally see a full, nice quality song from you. Been a while.
One of the best i've heard from you in a while
Lyrics are great, the concept is nice
Your quality is nice, which is a welcome change to your past low quality previews
You got some great multis n rhymes here, and the flow is hot
The chorus sums up the track perfect

Great stuff, best i've heard from you since Pride

thanx man apreciate the feedback n glad you liked it

DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!!

THIS WAS A DOPE TRACK!

Good lyrics, and the best I've personally heard from you
You got great rhymes
I loved the third verse

The chorus was fire!
Good work

Dmn, I really like this track

The beat is also damn good Nice work on it Mart

thanx man really glad you liked it suprised you prefered the third verse though lol, i feel as if i slacked and used the easy option with the multi's on that verse lol

thanx the feed ya'll

[Tash8]

Wack

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Wack

you suck donkey dick

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Listen Bar, i wont even listen to ur track, cuz u suck donkey dick! U ban my bf: mctworm, and he will kill ur little unimpessive ass! Faggot!

[Jay-19]

First of all, the beat is just straight awesome! Good work on that Mart85!

And the lyrics, as said before, are crazy! Only thing is I don't really catch up on every word, since I find it a little hard to understand the British accent. i'm, like most of you on here I think, more used to US rap. But anyway, I read the lyrics, and they're really really good! The delivery is good, it's not the best I've heard, but far from worst. I don't think I could do it better since it's the hardest thing for me to get going. The track is really good however. Great work man!

[Kez]

First of all, the beat is just straight awesome! Good work on that Mart85!

And the lyrics, as said before, are crazy! Only thing is I don't really catch up on every word, since I find it a little hard to understand the British accent. i'm, like most of you on here I think, more used to US rap. But anyway, I read the lyrics, and they're really really good! The delivery is good, it's not the best I've heard, but far from worst. I don't think I could do it better since it's the hardest thing for me to get going. The track is really good however. Great work man!

Actually, his accent is Scottish, lol

Listen Bar, i wont even listen to ur track, cuz u suck donkey dick! U ban my bf: mctworm, and he will kill ur little unimpessive ass! Faggot!

Wow, this is a woman?

How ladylike!



























Either a woman or a homo.

[Tash8]

Bar seriously this shit is completely wack, if it wasn't for mart i would rate this 0/10 but because of mart i have to automatically give it a 5/10

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Bar seriously this shit is completely wack, if it wasn't for mart i would rate this 0/10 but because of mart i have to automatically give it a 5/10

*pens the tash diss*

"if my name was tash, id kill myself today
then id be dead, what the fuck you goni say!!"

lyrical murder biatch

First of all, the beat is just straight awesome! Good work on that Mart85!

And the lyrics, as said before, are crazy! Only thing is I don't really catch up on every word, since I find it a little hard to understand the British accent. i'm, like most of you on here I think, more used to US rap. But anyway, I read the lyrics, and they're really really good! The delivery is good, it's not the best I've heard, but far from worst. I don't think I could do it better since it's the hardest thing for me to get going. The track is really good however. Great work man!

thanx man i understand people find it dificult to understand the accent, its hard for me to improve on it unless i had someone there to help me while recording, unforuently i dont, i try my best to speak clearly, i just got to keep practicing anywae, apreaciate the feedback man


everyone just ignore the assholes *including tash*

[matz]

im no expert but i liked it, hot mart85 beat as usual, liked your flow and the chorus has a bit of a meaning to it and is catchy, good stuff