[New] Bar - Permit Our Sin(Produced By Mart85)

[Tash8]

everyone just ignore the assholes *including tash*

oh ok, so ignore you?

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

im no expert but i liked it, hot mart85 beat as usual, liked your flow and the chorus has a bit of a meaning to it and is catchy, good stuff

thanx man i like it when someone who generaly doesnt study tracks in flow/lyrics/metaphors/delivery n stuff enjoy one of my tracks, shows the view of a different type of audience ya know, so thanx for checking it and feedback

everyone just ignore the assholes *including tash*

oh ok, so ignore you?

i guess so, but that doesnt work coz if you ignore me you cant listen to my new track and that defeats the purpose of this thread

[Unscarred]

man this is one awesome and the beat its just... crazy, sometimes i can't understand what your saying, i will give you 9/10, forgot to mention that the lyrics are just great

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

man this is one awesome and the beat its just... crazy, sometimes i can't understand what your saying, i will give you 9/10, forgot to mention that the lyrics are just great

thanx man, glad you liked it and apreciate the feedback

[B.A.D.]

shit... myspace don't work on this computer

I'll chek tomorrow first hour!!!

[Xray]

Bar's Effort Into The Song

Lyrics: They were well written. I can see you wrote them with heart and passion, and great concept.

Flow/Energy: Was one of your greatest, i can see improvement in both energy and flow. Heart was definitely there.

Mart85's Effort Into The Song

Beat: It was really nice, drums took effect and so did the melody.

Mixing: Very good mixing. You made Bar sound like he recorded this song in the studio. I really admire your production.

Overall: Bar & Mart85 Make A Lethal Combination When Both On One Song. Really Good Work Guys

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

shit... myspace don't work on this computer

I'll chek tomorrow first hour!!!

looking forward to it man, hope you like it and if myspace wot work i can send ya a zshare if you want

Bar's Effort Into The Song

Lyrics: They were well written. I can see you wrote them with heart and passion, and great concept.

Flow/Energy: Was one of your greatest, i can see improvement in both energy and flow. Heart was definitely there.

Mart85's Effort Into The Song

Beat: It was really nice, drums took effect and so did the melody.

Mixing: Very good mixing. You made Bar sound like he recorded this song in the studio. I really admire your production.

Overall: Bar & Mart85 Make A Lethal Combination When Both On One Song. Really Good Work Guys

thanx man apreaciate the feedback

[bg_pop]

Yea the song is GREAT MAN
The beat is hot your flow too
I am glad hat we have songs together

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

HEY BAR LOOK HERE, LOOK, LOOK DAMN IT

Just listened to the song, and damn man, the concept was on fire, you took that great concept and ran with it, pumping it up with hot lyrics, your sexy Scottish accent , and a great beat from Mart

Your best track yet, I believe I read somewhere you changed your style, well my good sir, your style now is, how should I put this.....FUCKIN' COOL

sorry about sounding like a radio ad great track man

lol. yeh if you listen to my other tracks from last year you;d hear i sound completely different lol. glad you liked it n thanx for the feedback

Yea the song is GREAT MAN
The beat is hot your flow too
I am glad hat we have songs together

thanx man, apreciate it

[randomghost]

sick track..lovin the beat....great delivery..hot flow...hot song....10/10

[Epidemik]

love the hook
solid tune though.
i'd bump that in my ride!

[B.A.D.]

k, finally listenin

aite, you jumped back again to your old style hahha... I had to read through the lyrics... gotta say, excelent metaphors man, sick sick lyrics... some lines are real inspiring, sounds sick man
ur flow is excelent, the quality is good but I didn't liked it, i think the beat was a bit too loud and pellas to soft, but thats just me.

the concept in general is great.

great work...

on the beat, I think mart can do better, just didn't liked it

[Ethos]

I like this track. the concept sounds pretty good. but I hate myspace's player. it always affects the quality of a song. Oh well. I give this a 9/10.

[mart85]

Thanks for the comments everybody, keep it coming!

And Bar, this track showed a good progression, compared to your previous tracks I think, your delivery and flow were better, and it had a real good concept Keep it up man

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

sick track..lovin the beat....great delivery..hot flow...hot song....10/10

thanx man, apreciate it

love the hook
solid tune though.
i'd bump that in my ride!

thanx man, glad you enjoyed it

k, finally listenin

aite, you jumped back again to your old style hahha... I had to read through the lyrics... gotta say, excelent metaphors man, sick sick lyrics... some lines are real inspiring, sounds sick man
ur flow is excelent, the quality is good but I didn't liked it, i think the beat was a bit too loud and pellas to soft, but thats just me.

the concept in general is great.

great work...

on the beat, I think mart can do better, just didn't liked it

apreciate the feedback man i wouldnt say this is my old style though, my delivery eccent and rhyme structure is the same way ive been doin it recently, only thing changed is that its mixed better and high quality production lol anywae, thanx for checking man

I like this track. the concept sounds pretty good. but I hate myspace's player. it always affects the quality of a song. Oh well. I give this a 9/10.

lol thanx for checking it out man

Thanks for the comments everybody, keep it coming!

And Bar, this track showed a good progression, compared to your previous tracks I think, your delivery and flow were better, and it had a real good concept Keep it up man

thanx man