Nice man

here's my effort
Now listen here J-Roc, You aint gotta say what, coz ill rip your throat apart and strangle yer voice box.
When you step to me you see I stand up tall, spit so much so hard leave you covered in a waterfall.
You wana battle i'll make the hair stand so close to your neck be like you wearing braids, and talking of battles you losing this one like one against Aids.
but you know what bruv it really is fine yea all cocher, leaving you with so many things to think about i should write it down in a brochure.
now its time for me likes its time for plan b, but i aint c to da p, im mother fucking Grizz-e-ll-y.
so you know ill give you a real diss, thats it im done, bitch why even respond to this?
Middle verse looks out of sync but works in my eyes if you read it write, couldn't fit it all in but it is the same line.