NEW RAP DOGG,SNIPPET

[Rap Dogg]

listen to the lyrics snippet.mp3 - 1.48MB

Here's a snippet of a song called ''Listen To The Lyrics'' which should be completly done with E-Z Money.Listen to it and I'd appreciate if you'd gimme couple of comments.Thank you in advance.

[DelinQuent]

beat sounds hot, intro vocals are way too loud. flow is off at a lot of spots. i'm not feeling the way you rap, just the way you try to pronounce words, sounds like you're trying to sound hood. if you know what i mean by that, it just sounds fake. i'm also not feeling the lyrics. rhymes aren't too good. sorry if it sounds harsh just trying to give solid feed so you actually have something to work on. keep working

[Rap Dogg]

I think you're bita exaggeratin...

[DelinQuent]

well fuck it then, see if i ever give you feedback again lmfao. i could give a fuck if you think i'm harsh, i'm just trying to help. if you just want people to ride your dick and say you're the hottest thing out, show the song to your family and friends, if you want honest feed that will actually help you if you improve upon what people mention to be negative, then show other rappers. i'm not hating on you, i'm not telling you to give up, i'm trying to tell you the weak points so you can build upone them for your next track, but if you don't like that then don't expect to get any better.

[Rap Dogg]

It's all good DQ,but there were many other rappers on other sites that had good comments.So,you are exaggeratin.But doesn't matter.

good job, keep it up, can't wait to do a collab some time

Thanks chet.You always got ma back,I aprecciate it.We can do collab anytime you want.Just holla.Ma e-mail is blackshady1@gmail.com.Lookin forward to it.

[Big Proof 4ever]

i listened and i think biggest problem is flow u dont follow beat man i dont think u sound like gangsta or shit it was aight wit me,but flow