Rain Matrix- Rain Makes It Rain

[Rain Matrix]

Track- Rain Makes It Rain
Artist- Rain Matrix
Album- Recording
File Type- MP3
Link-rain makes it rain.mp3 - 2.89MB

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

its gettin better
flow is a unstabil at times...but its gettin somewhere...slowly
keep it up

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

your getting there with the flow, its still bad but its a big improvement from the last time i heard you, quality is better aswell, lyrics were dope man some really sick lines in there,,just try to losen up a little bit more and keep it up

[Rap Dogg]

Lyrics are ok.Bit of stronger voice.Show more willin.You sound like you're bored.Put a bit of fire an it's good.
Respect.

[Rain Matrix]

^^^^^^In today's world that would make sense
I'll try to open up a little more...
I've been spitting a lot of freestyles and I think they'll record well

thanks to everyone

[Xray]

you sound like your reading a speech to your class..

i cant critisize ur flow and lyrics cause u don't have a rap voice...

your voice don't sound good on beats..

[Rain Matrix]

^^^ at least I'm not fake

I was born with a clef pallette and I'm white what do u expect u brainwashed fool

rap is about progressing in tha struggle of society and tha poetic way u express it

basically I'm saying lyrically u just wouldn't know

[<VerbalTouch>]

Can you upload someplace else? Its not lading for me.

[Big Proof 4ever]

for me it seems like u talkin not rappin,put more emotions,improve flow and it will be good

[Rain Matrix]

sorry about that I just put a lot into my writing
I haven't been recording long... however I'm working at it

I can listen to my music an be proud of myself
I didn't start rapping for approval but rather because I knew I could
peace to all and thanks for tha feedback
next time I'll make sure u know I mean it on tha mic