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Re: sticcy z: new song ..aint scared

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 28th, '08, 15:19

Xray wrote:
DelinQuent wrote:voice isn't working on this, so yes, go back to what you were doing. but even in your other songs it sounds like your forcing an angry sound. just try to sound natural.

thats exactly you're problem...your forcing an angry sound...

what i said about your voice is annoying is because your forcing a sound which doesn't suit you "an angry sound"..and the fact that you think im going around myspace and spreading lies..is just plain stupid..first of all..the ppl you got as your friends..aren't on my list nor do i give a fuck about them...so why the fuck would i do such a wasting time thing? :n: and me saying i don't like your forced style isn't hate...its reality..now man up and admit that style doesn't suit you :y: you could be ALOT better if you rap with your natural voice :y: and i appreciate the support to the other guys but im not hating...and if you think im being rough? than take a look around you and you'll see everything in life is rough :y:

i was actually joking when i said that you were runing your mouth,
but yes there is somrbody out there runinn it..
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Re: sticcy z: new song ..aint scared

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 28th, '08, 19:15

I dig this man! I love the echos and your voice. It's different from everything else I think. I like the chorus to. When I hear it, it reminds me of old school rap, I don't know why though, it just does. A great track man. The only thing that wasn't top notch was probably the flow in some parts. But fuck that. I like the track! :y: :smoking:
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Re: sticcy z: new song ..aint scared

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 28th, '08, 21:55

KillahGoat wrote:I dig this man! I love the echos and your voice. It's different from everything else I think. I like the chorus to. When I hear it, it reminds me of old school rap, I don't know why though, it just does. A great track man. The only thing that wasn't top notch was probably the flow in some parts. But fuck that. I like the track! :y: :smoking:

thanks man i apreciate the love :y:
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Re: sticcy z: new song ..aint scared

Postby Jay_LP1 » Mar 29th, '08, 03:58

Let me be honest with you man. Flow is not good at all . Hook is also bad . Beat is ok . You're putting too much energy in your verse which is not required and it ruins the song completely. Lyrics are below average. During some parts of this song , "Annoying" is the word first word that comes to mind.

1/10

I know it sounds harsh but I'm being honest with you.
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Re: sticcy z: new song ..aint scared

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 29th, '08, 04:20

officialblueboys wrote:Let me be honest with you man. Flow is not good at all . Hook is also bad . Beat is ok . You're putting too much energy in your verse which is not required and it ruins the song completely. Lyrics are below average. During some parts of this song , "Annoying" is the word first word that comes to mind.

1/10

I know it sounds harsh but I'm being honest with you.

well more power to ya :tounge2:
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Re: sticcy z: new song ..aint scared

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 29th, '08, 06:32

hmm

u need a better quality lol

the flow is weird but works good, the beat is hot
some rhymes schemes where sick, some ok, the brad pitt line is sick lol

hook is ok, nuttin special....

whole lyrics, and concept are good

only thing I'd work on this is the flow, cuz sometimes its lost, specially at the end of second verse
you rush yaself to much, work on that, also work on quality

nice concept... nice gangsta feeling

overal 7/10
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